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10/16/2008 c1 53Katie Nicole
I like this!

I like the setting, though I'll admit, I myself have never played D&D.. if that's what the setting is supposed to be. But I still enjoy it, a lot. The rhyming is very natural, with few disruptions, and you do a great job of telling a story in a poem, which is never easy without sounding somewhat cheezy, you know?

Great work (:

Katie

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