11/11/2008 c1 30DarkPhoenixIncarnate
Wow...beautifully written. I love the way you paragraph your words, To the left, and into the middle, it's a beautiful, unique style, and kept my attention. ^_^ Well done~!
Wow...beautifully written. I love the way you paragraph your words, To the left, and into the middle, it's a beautiful, unique style, and kept my attention. ^_^ Well done~!
9/22/2008 c1 43RedXfire
hold on ... finds time to read all your poems... holly crap I just cant keep up with it all... I'm sorry if I dont review all of them.. but.. holly...geez so um.. hmm
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Really nice job here i like how it trails off in the middle really nice almost like a song keeps you thinking so good job.
hold on ... finds time to read all your poems... holly crap I just cant keep up with it all... I'm sorry if I dont review all of them.. but.. holly...geez so um.. hmm
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Really nice job here i like how it trails off in the middle really nice almost like a song keeps you thinking so good job.