10/14/2008 c1 66WonderWing
I like this poem, it wasn't the gentle voice, or mysterious, giving tone. I think it was the clean, kind tenderness of this poem. it was honest and touching. The youthful way you describe love, then loss, then tragedy is compelling.
I like this poem, it wasn't the gentle voice, or mysterious, giving tone. I think it was the clean, kind tenderness of this poem. it was honest and touching. The youthful way you describe love, then loss, then tragedy is compelling.
9/18/2008 c1 9haveyouseenmyhaggis
That was beautiful. It really was touching and very true. Very well done! really well written and very nice.
~Paula~
That was beautiful. It really was touching and very true. Very well done! really well written and very nice.
~Paula~
9/18/2008 c1 10LyricsArePoetry
Oh I know what you mean!
This is soo briliant!
So powerful!
And soo soo true!
(Josie from FF...that may be obvious by same username...lolz!)
Oh I know what you mean!
This is soo briliant!
So powerful!
And soo soo true!
(Josie from FF...that may be obvious by same username...lolz!)
9/18/2008 c1 1MelissaLianne
Like I said in the Library, it's a really nice poem. Some of it sums me up right now. I really do love this poem.
Like I said in the Library, it's a really nice poem. Some of it sums me up right now. I really do love this poem.