
10/1/2008 c1
829Anaare
First of all, thank you for the kind review and apologies for returning the favour so late.
I thought this poem had a wonderful rhythm and some very vivid imagery. I even learnt a new word: defenestration. I honestly had not heard this word before.
I can relate a great deal to the feeling of this poem. The slow ways of summer are very recognizable.
Great work!

First of all, thank you for the kind review and apologies for returning the favour so late.
I thought this poem had a wonderful rhythm and some very vivid imagery. I even learnt a new word: defenestration. I honestly had not heard this word before.
I can relate a great deal to the feeling of this poem. The slow ways of summer are very recognizable.
Great work!
9/18/2008 c1
42Green Yoshi
I liked this one. You know, we were supposed to do more of these together.
Keep writing, I'm always waiting for more

I liked this one. You know, we were supposed to do more of these together.
Keep writing, I'm always waiting for more