1/18/2017 c3 Guest
It's so wrong to end with a cliffhanger such as this and not come back with another chapter let alone complete the story. This is so good with an unusual approach to a cliche storyline. Please finish!
It's so wrong to end with a cliffhanger such as this and not come back with another chapter let alone complete the story. This is so good with an unusual approach to a cliche storyline. Please finish!
6/22/2016 c3 Shyheart14
First off a round of applause for this story and might I add an ROFL on having Rick in the school girl outfit raking the lawn was priceless! Please update soon on this story.
First off a round of applause for this story and might I add an ROFL on having Rick in the school girl outfit raking the lawn was priceless! Please update soon on this story.
1/30/2015 c3 Sandra
I really liked these first three chapters. I wish that you could add another chapter or two!
I really liked these first three chapters. I wish that you could add another chapter or two!
8/21/2013 c3 JFJD
Wow. Rick is a jerk.
Did you give up on this story? I'd be interested in reading more.
Wow. Rick is a jerk.
Did you give up on this story? I'd be interested in reading more.
7/15/2013 c2 Random Reader
This is just too good ! Update pretty pwease!
This is just too good ! Update pretty pwease!
10/26/2012 c3 kiaopera9
Please, I know it has been a while but, please continue. This is too much of a good story to leave unfinished!
Please, I know it has been a while but, please continue. This is too much of a good story to leave unfinished!
8/26/2012 c3 Guest
more please !
more please !
3/29/2011 c3 chatty504
You so need to finish this story! its amazing! i cnt wait to see what she does to him!
You so need to finish this story! its amazing! i cnt wait to see what she does to him!
11/3/2010 c1 Artamiss Caine
I'm sad to see that you haven't updated this story since last year. I think it has great potential to go places. I think your writing style is unique and vivid. Of course, there are always a few things that can be tweaked to improve the fluidity and progress of the overall story but that's with everyone. Hope you update this and Ki Fashions soon.
I'm sad to see that you haven't updated this story since last year. I think it has great potential to go places. I think your writing style is unique and vivid. Of course, there are always a few things that can be tweaked to improve the fluidity and progress of the overall story but that's with everyone. Hope you update this and Ki Fashions soon.