for One Final Jump10/26/2008 c1 Cliff
Yes, it is indeed a horrible story.
Yes, it is indeed a horrible story.
9/23/2008 c1 
1Thalia Cross
I found it interesting. Kind of exhilarating, in it's own creepy kinda way. I've never heard suicide described like that. Nice job.
1Thalia CrossI found it interesting. Kind of exhilarating, in it's own creepy kinda way. I've never heard suicide described like that. Nice job.
9/23/2008 c1 Kelzzz
OMG CRISS YOU SCARE ME! FREAKK! jkjk :P It's a really interesting yet depressing poem. So... dramatic. It's quite scary, actually, the idea of suicide. Anyho.. GR8 JOB!
OMG CRISS YOU SCARE ME! FREAKK! jkjk :P It's a really interesting yet depressing poem. So... dramatic. It's quite scary, actually, the idea of suicide. Anyho.. GR8 JOB!
9/22/2008 c1 30null.account
This had a cool feel to it. I don't know how exactly to explain it...like someone being interviewed as they're killing themself, sort of. I'm not sure how else to describe but as interesting. Sorry for my pathetic vocabulary, but anyway, great job.
30null.accountThis had a cool feel to it. I don't know how exactly to explain it...like someone being interviewed as they're killing themself, sort of. I'm not sure how else to describe but as interesting. Sorry for my pathetic vocabulary, but anyway, great job.