for Catch of the day11/25/2009 c14 dreamsinger95
Hey
I absolutely LOVE all your stories. I think this was great, you have a real gift and i am really happy to know that you've gotten a book published, your writing is great!
I thought this ending was a little anti-climactic though.
Sincerely
DreamSinger95
Hey
I absolutely LOVE all your stories. I think this was great, you have a real gift and i am really happy to know that you've gotten a book published, your writing is great!
I thought this ending was a little anti-climactic though.
Sincerely
DreamSinger95
10/11/2009 c14 
2SleepyGlasses
darn you! darn you hell! why must you make this story so good... now I have to go and be sad because it's over and then watch 5 seasons of deadliest catch. I hope you're happy.
- Matt from B.C
2SleepyGlassesdarn you! darn you hell! why must you make this story so good... now I have to go and be sad because it's over and then watch 5 seasons of deadliest catch. I hope you're happy.
- Matt from B.C
8/10/2009 c14 three
You are awesome! Loved this story too! Thank you :-).
You are awesome! Loved this story too! Thank you :-).
7/17/2009 c14 little miss tiny
Ah, loved the story. Not to mention you update quite regularly.
Will miss the story now that it is done. D: The father and daughter relationship was...authentic and beautiful :
Any sequel? *wistful glance*
Anyway, GREAT JOB! :D
Ah, loved the story. Not to mention you update quite regularly.
Will miss the story now that it is done. D: The father and daughter relationship was...authentic and beautiful :
Any sequel? *wistful glance*
Anyway, GREAT JOB! :D
6/11/2009 c14 1Thalia Cross
I just read this entire story in one sitting, and it was AWESOME! Hehe...I absolutely loved it, and the ending was just perfect. This story would make a great movie. This is so going on my favorites list.
1Thalia CrossI just read this entire story in one sitting, and it was AWESOME! Hehe...I absolutely loved it, and the ending was just perfect. This story would make a great movie. This is so going on my favorites list.
6/11/2009 c14 chng234
the ending is quite abrupt. but i m glad that both daughter n father made up in the end
the ending is quite abrupt. but i m glad that both daughter n father made up in the end
6/10/2009 c14 1Pretend Jane
LoL. Of course the story had to end with her doing something crazy. That's exactly how the story began, so it would be strange if it ended any other way. Although I kind of wish she had more moments with Cole without her dad interrupting. Though I guess this story wasn't a romance, so I guess that's understandable. I totally wish for a sequel!
1Pretend JaneLoL. Of course the story had to end with her doing something crazy. That's exactly how the story began, so it would be strange if it ended any other way. Although I kind of wish she had more moments with Cole without her dad interrupting. Though I guess this story wasn't a romance, so I guess that's understandable. I totally wish for a sequel!
6/10/2009 c12 Pretend Jane
I couldn't help but think it was weird he confused his teenage daughter with her mom...and because his wife cheats he only talks to his daughther minimally? He shouldn't have made his daughter pay for her mother's mistakes.
I couldn't help but think it was weird he confused his teenage daughter with her mom...and because his wife cheats he only talks to his daughther minimally? He shouldn't have made his daughter pay for her mother's mistakes.
6/10/2009 c10 Pretend Jane
I love this story. I love your main character. She is one tough and fun loving chick. I like how she can hang with the guys. She's one of those girls who can prove guys wrong because she isn't all what she appears. It seems she's getting Cole's interest. Gotta love it. I'm glad I decided to read this when you had finished it. I hate waiting for chaps. Anyway, good story.
I love this story. I love your main character. She is one tough and fun loving chick. I like how she can hang with the guys. She's one of those girls who can prove guys wrong because she isn't all what she appears. It seems she's getting Cole's interest. Gotta love it. I'm glad I decided to read this when you had finished it. I hate waiting for chaps. Anyway, good story.
6/10/2009 c14 Samuel Harrisson
Wow. That was a fantastic ending. I congratulate you. Although this story had times where it could have been cliche, it never dipped to that level. It was a wonderful story. I greatly enjoyed it. Good job!
Wow. That was a fantastic ending. I congratulate you. Although this story had times where it could have been cliche, it never dipped to that level. It was a wonderful story. I greatly enjoyed it. Good job!
6/4/2009 c13 vizzini
I wasn't terribly sure I'd like this, but I'm pleasantly surprised to find it has an engaging plot and likable characters. Even the moral issues in it are well placed and well portrayed. Hurrah! Will be waiting for updates on this one.
Only one small thing to note; sometimes the italics are abused in places, so watch out for isolated over-usage of italics. Otherwise, kudos.
I wasn't terribly sure I'd like this, but I'm pleasantly surprised to find it has an engaging plot and likable characters. Even the moral issues in it are well placed and well portrayed. Hurrah! Will be waiting for updates on this one.
Only one small thing to note; sometimes the italics are abused in places, so watch out for isolated over-usage of italics. Otherwise, kudos.
6/3/2009 c12 chng234
i feel so sad for crista's dad... but even if his wife is having an affair... he shld not have left her "alone" for 4 years...
i feel so sad for crista's dad... but even if his wife is having an affair... he shld not have left her "alone" for 4 years...