
5/26/2012 c6 Nightly Vigilant
Okay, I now love this story. You are a terrific author, you should really try and get this published when you finish it!
I've always loved the idea of changelings and werewolves. Thank you so much for bringing that dream to life!
With how great this story is, I'm surprised you haven't gotten many reviews!
Well consider me a new reviewer! ;D
Long story short, you're awesome, your book is awesome, and please update soon!
Your friend,
Amber Icefire
;D
Okay, I now love this story. You are a terrific author, you should really try and get this published when you finish it!
I've always loved the idea of changelings and werewolves. Thank you so much for bringing that dream to life!
With how great this story is, I'm surprised you haven't gotten many reviews!
Well consider me a new reviewer! ;D
Long story short, you're awesome, your book is awesome, and please update soon!
Your friend,
Amber Icefire
;D
6/18/2011 c5 Equilibrium
Firstly, it's rare for me to read stories with a lot of romantic drama. Or werewolf/changeling stories, for that matter. That said, I made an exception for this, and found it quite nice. Good dialogue, intelligible grammar... A few mistakes here and there, and a bit too much melodrama (especially with the painful romantic brooding in chapter 5), but nothing particularly cringe-worthy.
I do like the fact that Cara didn't immediately go into angst mode when she first transformed. Considering how many werewolf/changeling stories out there have an emo heroine who mopes about her new life, it's commendable that you attempted to differentiate yours from the rest. Keep working on maintaining a unique spin to this story. I'll be watching to see where it goes.
Firstly, it's rare for me to read stories with a lot of romantic drama. Or werewolf/changeling stories, for that matter. That said, I made an exception for this, and found it quite nice. Good dialogue, intelligible grammar... A few mistakes here and there, and a bit too much melodrama (especially with the painful romantic brooding in chapter 5), but nothing particularly cringe-worthy.
I do like the fact that Cara didn't immediately go into angst mode when she first transformed. Considering how many werewolf/changeling stories out there have an emo heroine who mopes about her new life, it's commendable that you attempted to differentiate yours from the rest. Keep working on maintaining a unique spin to this story. I'll be watching to see where it goes.
10/5/2008 c3 eternita
I love stories about werewolves but there are few and they are usually poorly written. This one is pure delight, it is very interesting and very well written. I can't wait to read more.
I love stories about werewolves but there are few and they are usually poorly written. This one is pure delight, it is very interesting and very well written. I can't wait to read more.
10/5/2008 c3
2AngelAce2010
More more more more more more more more! please!
That would be VERY amazing! @.@

More more more more more more more more! please!
That would be VERY amazing! @.@
10/1/2008 c3
52Marine Wifey
Very awesome! I am really getting into this! I can't wait to read more! ^^

Very awesome! I am really getting into this! I can't wait to read more! ^^
9/28/2008 c3 I.F
I am so sorry. I meant to reply to Ch2 but then I forgot so I'm writing this down before I forget again. This is a good story, and you're updating so QUICKLY! Thank you for the update, I can't wait to see how this turns out.
I am so sorry. I meant to reply to Ch2 but then I forgot so I'm writing this down before I forget again. This is a good story, and you're updating so QUICKLY! Thank you for the update, I can't wait to see how this turns out.
9/28/2008 c3 Hidden Flowers
Cute. I like this. YOu're mean about those cliffies, but still, I like this. Update?
Cute. I like this. YOu're mean about those cliffies, but still, I like this. Update?
9/26/2008 c2 Hidden Flowers
UPDATE? IT IS TRES MAGNIFIQUE, BUT I WANT THE REST OF THE STORY! DO YOU KNOW HOW OFTEN I READ UNFINISHED STORIES? VIRTUALLY NEVER! YOU SHOULD FEEL HONORED! LOL.
UPDATE? IT IS TRES MAGNIFIQUE, BUT I WANT THE REST OF THE STORY! DO YOU KNOW HOW OFTEN I READ UNFINISHED STORIES? VIRTUALLY NEVER! YOU SHOULD FEEL HONORED! LOL.
9/25/2008 c1 Hidden Flowers
Update? I like this. Cara isn't tough as nails. She's made of titanium. Or diamonds, but that might come across wrong. Anyway, as for the dose of disgusting French, c'est tres exquisite. I wish I could use the accents on my computer.
Update? I like this. Cara isn't tough as nails. She's made of titanium. Or diamonds, but that might come across wrong. Anyway, as for the dose of disgusting French, c'est tres exquisite. I wish I could use the accents on my computer.