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10/7/2008 c1 10Aurora Corona
Wow...

I can sorta understand your parents' feelings now.

All your fictionpress work are so depressing! And here I thought you were a happy-go-lucky type of person!

But anyway,

Both your poems are fantabulous.

Short yet detailed.

Great philosophy on life.

This poem is so scary...

yet so beautiful.

keep updating!

sorry I commented on love and rivalry b4 I saw who was the author!

Update soon!

xx

SP (my awesome initials for StrawberryPop. too cool ;))
9/23/2008 c1 9ohxrosie
I like this poem, it was very simple but that made it all the more captivating. It's something we can all relate to, and I guess that's the point.
9/23/2008 c1 50Eve's Deception
"And you take a marker and scrawl ugly messages on your walls.

Life sucks; you’re angry.

And nothing can change that fact."

this reminds me of soemthing i did rather recently. just kind of made me pause. and then i think i found a lot of what i'm going through in your poem. its interesting. i like the breaks

-eve

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