for I'm not Stalking You8/10/2009 c1 
10CassandraStacy
First off, I love the repetition this poem has with the vicious glare and the smile so rare. Did this poem just come to you or is it based off of real life events? LOL. You don't have to answer that. But I can actually relate to this poem . . . in a strange way. I mean, just wanting to see his smile, but all I get is a look of annoyance to be caught staring. Again. Woosh. So glad to be through with high school. Great poem!
Cassandra
10CassandraStacyFirst off, I love the repetition this poem has with the vicious glare and the smile so rare. Did this poem just come to you or is it based off of real life events? LOL. You don't have to answer that. But I can actually relate to this poem . . . in a strange way. I mean, just wanting to see his smile, but all I get is a look of annoyance to be caught staring. Again. Woosh. So glad to be through with high school. Great poem!
Cassandra
7/8/2009 c1 12M Wilridge
It reminds me of trees.. The idea of falling in love... And Amsterdam... Because it's natural... Wonderful.. And I've never been there before...
M.. P.S. Thanks for the alert but read the A/N.. REVIEW OR DIE..
12M WilridgeIt reminds me of trees.. The idea of falling in love... And Amsterdam... Because it's natural... Wonderful.. And I've never been there before...
M.. P.S. Thanks for the alert but read the A/N.. REVIEW OR DIE..
1/15/2009 c1 criti-sized
I like the honest touch in it. Not only does the poem carry a nice hint of realty in it, but it shows a true light in emotions.
Great poem.
C.S.
I like the honest touch in it. Not only does the poem carry a nice hint of realty in it, but it shows a true light in emotions.
Great poem.
C.S.
11/2/2008 c1 8Written
a bit too simple for my taste, but its hard to put together a villanelle, so you must be commended for that! its lovely :)
8Writtena bit too simple for my taste, but its hard to put together a villanelle, so you must be commended for that! its lovely :)
9/23/2008 c1 Fragile Things
i thought there was a bit too much repetition but i love the rhyme you choose and the tone of the poem
i thought there was a bit too much repetition but i love the rhyme you choose and the tone of the poem
9/23/2008 c1 33sarah.wrote.this.for.you
I like the title :) Your poem is true tho..It's tough to be in love w/ sum1 who doesn't feel the same. As Charlie Brown once said "Nothing spoils the taste of peanut butter like Unrequieted love" or something along those lines (and excuse the spelling issues, I'm a horrible speller)
Good job tho :)
33sarah.wrote.this.for.youI like the title :) Your poem is true tho..It's tough to be in love w/ sum1 who doesn't feel the same. As Charlie Brown once said "Nothing spoils the taste of peanut butter like Unrequieted love" or something along those lines (and excuse the spelling issues, I'm a horrible speller)
Good job tho :)