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11/18/2008 c1 24a certain slant of light
I haven't done it since May but I think about it every day.
11/1/2008 c1 1smellgoody
WHOA! Melissa! that's all i can say! i almost cried. so good!

You know who i am buddy.
9/24/2008 c1 173Little girl Big world
wow i can SO relate to this! its so honest and the words flow very nicely. i think theres always going to be some temptation cuz i haven't done it for almost a year but it still crosses my mind when i get really upset...good job & stay strong!

anyways, this is a great poem! keep writing
9/23/2008 c1 460Time To Change
very raw but in a controlled and well-structured way.

The temptation stays forever, as far as I can tell. But eventually, it's not always the first thought and it gets easier to resist.
9/23/2008 c1 54Artemis Anderson
Very well done. And good job on not having done so in so many months. Keep it up. I know it's difficult.
9/23/2008 c1 128vitriolicvermilion
You have said what I want to say but somehow have never been able to quite so eloquently. This poem is honest, raw, relateable, and most of all...delicious (:

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