for The Näken11/2/2009 c6 Icyfire4w5
I can't imagine Katrine bantering with the nix, I really can't. He seems so friendly, haha.
I can't imagine Katrine bantering with the nix, I really can't. He seems so friendly, haha.
11/2/2009 c5 Icyfire4w5
Wow, Katrine will have to find out the Nix's name before she can kill him. I guess that she'll have to be really, really cunning. By the way, this chapter reminds me of Isis, who has tricked Ra into revealing his secret name. :)
Wow, Katrine will have to find out the Nix's name before she can kill him. I guess that she'll have to be really, really cunning. By the way, this chapter reminds me of Isis, who has tricked Ra into revealing his secret name. :)
11/2/2009 c2 Icyfire4w5
"That she’s going to be drowned by a water spirit on her birthday?"
Um, I've been wondering if Katrine can kill the nix. If she succeeds, then she'll be a heroine. (Oops, maybe the nix wants Katrine as a bride.)
"That she’s going to be drowned by a water spirit on her birthday?"
Um, I've been wondering if Katrine can kill the nix. If she succeeds, then she'll be a heroine. (Oops, maybe the nix wants Katrine as a bride.)
7/1/2009 c1 Enora T
I think this story is retold beautifully. There aren't many stories of the Naken or their general myth, so they're not well known, so I was pleasantly surprised reading this (do i sound senile?)It's good to see it with more depth and I like the character and life you breathe into Katrine, showing her motives.
It was a sad ending, and I almost tricked myself into believing it was going to end happily. But it was overall, a great read and I loved your retelling of it.
I think this story is retold beautifully. There aren't many stories of the Naken or their general myth, so they're not well known, so I was pleasantly surprised reading this (do i sound senile?)It's good to see it with more depth and I like the character and life you breathe into Katrine, showing her motives.
It was a sad ending, and I almost tricked myself into believing it was going to end happily. But it was overall, a great read and I loved your retelling of it.
6/21/2009 c10 
1Angel Chaser
i liked that Nix, your cruel. Just kidding, mostly, i love all of your stories, please continue with your fine work.
1Angel Chaseri liked that Nix, your cruel. Just kidding, mostly, i love all of your stories, please continue with your fine work.
6/19/2009 c10 hoptart
This is very late, a couple of months late, but...I'm sad to see that this is over :(. I can't wait for the sequel, I'm guessing that it will be your own story, plot and all? I also can't wait for 'The Confessions/Adventures of an Underage Fantasy Addict' - saw it on your profile XD, the character sounds a lot like me because I want that too.
This is very late, a couple of months late, but...I'm sad to see that this is over :(. I can't wait for the sequel, I'm guessing that it will be your own story, plot and all? I also can't wait for 'The Confessions/Adventures of an Underage Fantasy Addict' - saw it on your profile XD, the character sounds a lot like me because I want that too.
6/7/2009 c10 1Varelie
Wow I certainly wasn't expecting THAT to happen in the end... caught me by surprise!
1VarelieWow I certainly wasn't expecting THAT to happen in the end... caught me by surprise!
4/26/2009 c10 1artificial destiny
hmm. that was good
not unpredictable but not entirely predictable either :)
i kept sympathizing with the nix though. he seemed so lonely :T
1artificial destinyhmm. that was good
not unpredictable but not entirely predictable either :)
i kept sympathizing with the nix though. he seemed so lonely :T
4/26/2009 c2 artificial destiny
great start. im loving it already
all the characters are very believable/real :)
(turnip bread? haha)
great start. im loving it already
all the characters are very believable/real :)
(turnip bread? haha)
4/25/2009 c9 Animefan1875
Oh my gosh! That was so sad!
I was expecting her to kill the nix, not herslef!
Great story though
Oh my gosh! That was so sad!
I was expecting her to kill the nix, not herslef!
Great story though
2/8/2009 c10 3Amarantis
I thought there wasn't going to be a sad ending? Even when she plunged the knife into her heart, I was thinking that she'll somehow magically revive or something. So, even you made it obvious on the last chapter that she was dying, it was unexpected and not typical. I'll be waiting for the sequel.
3AmarantisI thought there wasn't going to be a sad ending? Even when she plunged the knife into her heart, I was thinking that she'll somehow magically revive or something. So, even you made it obvious on the last chapter that she was dying, it was unexpected and not typical. I'll be waiting for the sequel.
2/7/2009 c10 anonymous.illusion
wow
wonderful story. I think it's one of the most beautiful folk-tales I've ever read.
wow
wonderful story. I think it's one of the most beautiful folk-tales I've ever read.