for The Näken10/4/2008 c4 CookieMunster715
Another great chapter! Congrats!
Keep up the good work, and update soon!
~Cookie
Another great chapter! Congrats!
Keep up the good work, and update soon!
~Cookie
9/28/2008 c3 CookieMunster715
Wow... that was very good. More original than most fairy tale remakes. I really like it. Update soon keep up the good work!
Wow... that was very good. More original than most fairy tale remakes. I really like it. Update soon keep up the good work!
9/27/2008 c3 
1Elspeth Rue
I really like it thus far, I'm a sucker for fairy tales. Keep up the good work!
1Elspeth RueI really like it thus far, I'm a sucker for fairy tales. Keep up the good work!
9/24/2008 c2 2Mystic-Spiritus
"Or perhaps an angel… No, angles didn’t steal old people’s children away from them."
Angel is spelled wrong c:
Lovely so far.
2Mystic-Spiritus"Or perhaps an angel… No, angles didn’t steal old people’s children away from them."
Angel is spelled wrong c:
Lovely so far.
9/23/2008 c1 Jeyhdhshsnksshxb
I like it so far Chris! I think it will turn out to be a very interesting piece. Keep working on it and I will be back soon to review on it again when you add more. i like it so far. I can't to see what happenes next. Your grammar was great and you didn't use alot of adjective to the point where they get annoying. Thank you for that. And keeping writing and please update as soon as you can. Bye
I like it so far Chris! I think it will turn out to be a very interesting piece. Keep working on it and I will be back soon to review on it again when you add more. i like it so far. I can't to see what happenes next. Your grammar was great and you didn't use alot of adjective to the point where they get annoying. Thank you for that. And keeping writing and please update as soon as you can. Bye