
7/4/2018 c1
43zanybellecloudo
It is reminiscent of how feelings easily cling to something which you later struggle to believe was ever real. Honesty and hurt, both told powerfully in this piece. My favourite lines were: "all that's here are the cinders of this ventricular space." (Amazing symbolism) and "And under the moonlight I comfortlessly cry," (Deeply moving and often true). Thanks for sharing, ZB.

It is reminiscent of how feelings easily cling to something which you later struggle to believe was ever real. Honesty and hurt, both told powerfully in this piece. My favourite lines were: "all that's here are the cinders of this ventricular space." (Amazing symbolism) and "And under the moonlight I comfortlessly cry," (Deeply moving and often true). Thanks for sharing, ZB.