for There's no such thing as fairies!9/5/2009 c11 rara saryn
I love your story. The cat's names sounded funny. The nasty one sounds like our cat medusa. She's the queen of the house, and tends to pounce on the others for no reason at all. Please write more soon.
I love your story. The cat's names sounded funny. The nasty one sounds like our cat medusa. She's the queen of the house, and tends to pounce on the others for no reason at all. Please write more soon.
8/15/2009 c11 Kiya14
V laughed. “Yeah, can you just see us convincing our Moms to call us in sick? 'Hello, this is Mrs. Coleridge, my daughter has to help out an “imaginary” creature so she won't be coming in to school today.'” This line really made me laugh.
It's all coming together now isn't it! Bit by bit finding out what's going on. Can't wait for your next chapter
V laughed. “Yeah, can you just see us convincing our Moms to call us in sick? 'Hello, this is Mrs. Coleridge, my daughter has to help out an “imaginary” creature so she won't be coming in to school today.'” This line really made me laugh.
It's all coming together now isn't it! Bit by bit finding out what's going on. Can't wait for your next chapter
8/6/2009 c10 Kiya14
Brilliant as always :-)
I love the references to Red Dwarf as I'm sure you know by now lol
Can't wait to find out what happened to Leilira though!
Brilliant as always :-)
I love the references to Red Dwarf as I'm sure you know by now lol
Can't wait to find out what happened to Leilira though!
7/7/2009 c8 Kiya14
Firstly I have to say that I just LOVE Izzy's family. They are so 'real' but those names! Where do you come up with this. It's inspired lol.
I loved the bit about standing outside and calling for Mr Fluffypants too. Reminds me of how carefully we used to pick our pets names to be sure we wouldn't embarrass ourselves in public!
Looking forward to more, as always
Firstly I have to say that I just LOVE Izzy's family. They are so 'real' but those names! Where do you come up with this. It's inspired lol.
I loved the bit about standing outside and calling for Mr Fluffypants too. Reminds me of how carefully we used to pick our pets names to be sure we wouldn't embarrass ourselves in public!
Looking forward to more, as always
5/31/2009 c6 Kiya14
Yeah! Finally over my pc trouble and can review!
Another fab chapter. We're really getting to know V and her family now I think which makes sure that the reader is engaged.
Looking forward to seeing the next one published.
Yeah! Finally over my pc trouble and can review!
Another fab chapter. We're really getting to know V and her family now I think which makes sure that the reader is engaged.
Looking forward to seeing the next one published.
4/25/2009 c5 Kiya14
Hiya,
I love this chapter. I love the introduction of the kitten too, especially understanding the background story.
Craptacular - wonderful word and I love the way you described V's mood when she gets the note from her Mom. Typical teenager behaviour and that's what makes her so believable as a character.
Great update. Can't wait for more. x
Hiya,
I love this chapter. I love the introduction of the kitten too, especially understanding the background story.
Craptacular - wonderful word and I love the way you described V's mood when she gets the note from her Mom. Typical teenager behaviour and that's what makes her so believable as a character.
Great update. Can't wait for more. x
3/27/2009 c4 Kiya14
I adore the relationship V has with her father and her appreciate of it too. I did laugh when she tried to get him to give her a cup of coffee though!
I also thought the way in which she dealt with the Dolls House Chair incident was great. Turning it around on one of the bullies and threatening to 'eviscerate' him in fiction.
Another great chapter and I really look forward to more. Such a lovely story.
I adore the relationship V has with her father and her appreciate of it too. I did laugh when she tried to get him to give her a cup of coffee though!
I also thought the way in which she dealt with the Dolls House Chair incident was great. Turning it around on one of the bullies and threatening to 'eviscerate' him in fiction.
Another great chapter and I really look forward to more. Such a lovely story.
11/14/2008 c2 
6fictionalboyfriend
Wow, I'm thoroughly enjoying this so far.
Just one nitpicky comment: "She carefully pulled the bookcase away from the wall to ." Seems like there's a word missing here.
6fictionalboyfriendWow, I'm thoroughly enjoying this so far.
Just one nitpicky comment: "She carefully pulled the bookcase away from the wall to ." Seems like there's a word missing here.
11/14/2008 c1 10Carrietta Dragana
An interesting start. I think this has a lot of potential! Keep up the good work. :)
10Carrietta DraganaAn interesting start. I think this has a lot of potential! Keep up the good work. :)
11/4/2008 c3 Kiya14
Ooh..I just love the touch of scifi in there. I didn't really expect that.
I love the idea that V has fairies in her house and she's offering to colour her hair! - Brilliant!
I also love the inclusion of the 'photographs'. Fabulous 'real' detail included to make it all the more gripping.
I can't wait for the rest.
And just for the record - I LOVE V!
Ooh..I just love the touch of scifi in there. I didn't really expect that.
I love the idea that V has fairies in her house and she's offering to colour her hair! - Brilliant!
I also love the inclusion of the 'photographs'. Fabulous 'real' detail included to make it all the more gripping.
I can't wait for the rest.
And just for the record - I LOVE V!
10/13/2008 c2 Kiya14
I really do love this.
I love V - she really feels like a 15 year old girl. And the PVC bit was so funny.
I like the way she uses V and can't understand why people don't get it. You've created a very 'real' character in her.
I can't wait to read the rest :)
I really do love this.
I love V - she really feels like a 15 year old girl. And the PVC bit was so funny.
I like the way she uses V and can't understand why people don't get it. You've created a very 'real' character in her.
I can't wait to read the rest :)
10/13/2008 c1 Kiya14
Wow, that was a really powerful opening paragraph and so clever the way that you turn it so that you realise that it's actually V writing - love it!
And I love the last line - '..tiny, purple woman running behind the mouse.'
I've also added you to my Author alert list as this one crept in under the radar... lol
Wow, that was a really powerful opening paragraph and so clever the way that you turn it so that you realise that it's actually V writing - love it!
And I love the last line - '..tiny, purple woman running behind the mouse.'
I've also added you to my Author alert list as this one crept in under the radar... lol