
3/16/2009 c1
4lookingwest
for a suicide poem, this was very well done! the only little criticism i have for you, is make sure in your summary you use the correct "sent" because in the summary you used "scent" which i don't think makes sense in the context you meant.

for a suicide poem, this was very well done! the only little criticism i have for you, is make sure in your summary you use the correct "sent" because in the summary you used "scent" which i don't think makes sense in the context you meant.
10/12/2008 c1
5Looking for Bliss
Wow, dark much? Still, it reads really nicely, your rhyming is brilliant. I love the flow of it and the imagery.

Wow, dark much? Still, it reads really nicely, your rhyming is brilliant. I love the flow of it and the imagery.
9/27/2008 c1
3nothings-what-it-seems
that was really good... the way u were albe to write that.. was just really great!

that was really good... the way u were albe to write that.. was just really great!