for Just So You Know7/17/2018 c33 Guest
Absolutely adore this story. The drama, romance, humour, and plot twists kept me hooked to every single word and prevented me from stopping myself from reading continuously. Thank you for sharing it with us
Absolutely adore this story. The drama, romance, humour, and plot twists kept me hooked to every single word and prevented me from stopping myself from reading continuously. Thank you for sharing it with us
9/6/2016 c33 boombom
I'm speechless. This is one of the best ! i just cant keep my eyes shut right away. I'm always looking forward to every chapter. Thumbs up. i love it. :-*
I'm speechless. This is one of the best ! i just cant keep my eyes shut right away. I'm always looking forward to every chapter. Thumbs up. i love it. :-*
5/10/2016 c1 Guest
this story is one of my favorites. Whenever I remember fiction press this story is one I always reread. Took a while to find this time, I almost thought you deleted it. And I've noticed you haven't written in a while but I guess that means you're doing amazing things.
this story is one of my favorites. Whenever I remember fiction press this story is one I always reread. Took a while to find this time, I almost thought you deleted it. And I've noticed you haven't written in a while but I guess that means you're doing amazing things.
10/19/2015 c33 jacky
Hey,
I liked the story very much. I am not so good in englisch because in the country i come from its not the language we speak. But it is funny how the expressions are the same. And yes sometimes i did have to use google translate bit i didn't mind. Aw stupid autocorrect! My phone dont like it when i typ words that aren't Dutch. But back to my review i just wanted to say that you should publish a book, because it is a very good story!
Greatings, Jacky
Hey,
I liked the story very much. I am not so good in englisch because in the country i come from its not the language we speak. But it is funny how the expressions are the same. And yes sometimes i did have to use google translate bit i didn't mind. Aw stupid autocorrect! My phone dont like it when i typ words that aren't Dutch. But back to my review i just wanted to say that you should publish a book, because it is a very good story!
Greatings, Jacky
6/30/2015 c14 Beatlesintheheart12
Haven't read this in over 3 years. It's so much better than I remembered - if that's possible. Your writing skills and plot build are just spectacular, magical even. Please. Please. Get this published. I would cherish it in my bookshelf and read it until the pages started to fold naturally from overuse.
Haven't read this in over 3 years. It's so much better than I remembered - if that's possible. Your writing skills and plot build are just spectacular, magical even. Please. Please. Get this published. I would cherish it in my bookshelf and read it until the pages started to fold naturally from overuse.
5/4/2015 c9 Maya
Type your review here.I personally think Terra's character is too self consumed and plain annoying other than that great story
Type your review here.I personally think Terra's character is too self consumed and plain annoying other than that great story
3/12/2015 c5 Rats are awesome
THIS IS AN AWESOME BOOK
THIS IS AN AWESOME BOOK
2/18/2015 c33 
10Emoddess
Alright, I have to say this. I came across your story two or three years ago, if I'm not mistaken and I've read and even favourite it because this is one hell of a brilliant read. I mean, you've got me hooked on this story and even though there was a hiatus, you completed it last year and I finally got the chance to read this till the end now. The whole thing between Ocean and Terra? Just fantastic! I was a bit afraid because I didn't know if they were going to get a happy ending or not but I must say, I am very much content with how this ended. You've had me falling in love with the characters, gotten angry at them and even crying at some parts (I honestly did cry) and overall, I just love your writing in this. This is one of the stories that I would never get tired of reading. Words can't even express how much I wholeheartedly adore this so thank you :)
10EmoddessAlright, I have to say this. I came across your story two or three years ago, if I'm not mistaken and I've read and even favourite it because this is one hell of a brilliant read. I mean, you've got me hooked on this story and even though there was a hiatus, you completed it last year and I finally got the chance to read this till the end now. The whole thing between Ocean and Terra? Just fantastic! I was a bit afraid because I didn't know if they were going to get a happy ending or not but I must say, I am very much content with how this ended. You've had me falling in love with the characters, gotten angry at them and even crying at some parts (I honestly did cry) and overall, I just love your writing in this. This is one of the stories that I would never get tired of reading. Words can't even express how much I wholeheartedly adore this so thank you :)
1/2/2015 c33 cassie4ever11
Ok I have a few things to say. #1 u r my idol because u r like th only person that can write one story in about 6 years (if I'm doing the math right) #2 u wrote the best story in the world and u should really start to publish this as book #3 I love the way you wrote the story and I felt that it was real in a way. #4 keep writing! #5 u are like the only author that has made a story that I won't stop reading (sometimes when it gets to serious or sad I stop reading but with this one I couldn't stop reading for a second) #6 once again I Will tell u. U r the best writer in the world :-):-P :-D O:-) ;-) B-) :-)
Ok I have a few things to say. #1 u r my idol because u r like th only person that can write one story in about 6 years (if I'm doing the math right) #2 u wrote the best story in the world and u should really start to publish this as book #3 I love the way you wrote the story and I felt that it was real in a way. #4 keep writing! #5 u are like the only author that has made a story that I won't stop reading (sometimes when it gets to serious or sad I stop reading but with this one I couldn't stop reading for a second) #6 once again I Will tell u. U r the best writer in the world :-):-P :-D O:-) ;-) B-) :-)
10/11/2014 c9 Mistrelia of the Ice
Really? Make him a prick and then make us and Terra give him pity? I'm only allowing this once but she had better make him so fucking jealous by dating someone as seriously fucking cute as Cal or at least someone who treats her so amazingly that he fucking vomits blood his head spins so fast.
Really? Make him a prick and then make us and Terra give him pity? I'm only allowing this once but she had better make him so fucking jealous by dating someone as seriously fucking cute as Cal or at least someone who treats her so amazingly that he fucking vomits blood his head spins so fast.
10/11/2014 c8 Mistrelia of the Ice
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand, all at once you've pissed me off again. At first you had me wanting to vomit, because if she did try to kill herself it is all Ocean's fault. But at the same time, I don't really blame the way he handled Taylor. You gotta be firm with bitches like that. My problem is everything's being blamed on Terra. Still, I personally know from experience it takes a fucking hell of a lot more to kill yourself over a guy who doesn't even like you, so there either has to be more going on in Taylor's life, the drowning incident was an accident, or she seriously needs some fucking Vicodin.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand, all at once you've pissed me off again. At first you had me wanting to vomit, because if she did try to kill herself it is all Ocean's fault. But at the same time, I don't really blame the way he handled Taylor. You gotta be firm with bitches like that. My problem is everything's being blamed on Terra. Still, I personally know from experience it takes a fucking hell of a lot more to kill yourself over a guy who doesn't even like you, so there either has to be more going on in Taylor's life, the drowning incident was an accident, or she seriously needs some fucking Vicodin.
10/11/2014 c7 Mistrelia of the Ice
FUCK YOU! IN ONE SIMPLE, SOLID CHAPTER YOU'VE GOT ME IN THE SAME BOAT SHE'S IN! I no longer hate that irritating son of a fucking player bitch but I still want him to drown in a pool of his own viciously removed blood, but we'll see how this goes. Just so you know, I'm very angry with you for making me enjoy myself.
FUCK YOU! IN ONE SIMPLE, SOLID CHAPTER YOU'VE GOT ME IN THE SAME BOAT SHE'S IN! I no longer hate that irritating son of a fucking player bitch but I still want him to drown in a pool of his own viciously removed blood, but we'll see how this goes. Just so you know, I'm very angry with you for making me enjoy myself.
10/11/2014 c6 Mistrelia of the Ice
Is she seriously going to fall for that fucking jackass that quickly? Like, I get it. I get it that it's about them, but I'm really annoyed. I hope she doesn't become a pathetic girl who fawns all over herself and gives him her way. It's one thing when they hate each other, hell it's another thing when they hate each other for fun, but in the end, it all comes down to respect, something he has yet to do. And the whole "Oh I'm suddenly a good guy because I like you" thing is complete bullshit to me. I'm spiteful and expect him to be in pain before he's forgiven. Basically, I have to want to forgive him, and that isn't happening any time soon. I sincerely hope your story turns out to be a success. At least with me anyway. I'm a bit particular, as you can see.
Is she seriously going to fall for that fucking jackass that quickly? Like, I get it. I get it that it's about them, but I'm really annoyed. I hope she doesn't become a pathetic girl who fawns all over herself and gives him her way. It's one thing when they hate each other, hell it's another thing when they hate each other for fun, but in the end, it all comes down to respect, something he has yet to do. And the whole "Oh I'm suddenly a good guy because I like you" thing is complete bullshit to me. I'm spiteful and expect him to be in pain before he's forgiven. Basically, I have to want to forgive him, and that isn't happening any time soon. I sincerely hope your story turns out to be a success. At least with me anyway. I'm a bit particular, as you can see.
10/11/2014 c5 Mistrelia of the Ice
I just really want him to die. Seriously, there are no words. I hate you for making me so wrathful at almost nine in the morning. But seriously, you're doing a fantastic job. I'm excited and mad. The only story I've really liked so far on Fiction Press is one called London Calling but yours is pissing me off in all the right ways.
I just really want him to die. Seriously, there are no words. I hate you for making me so wrathful at almost nine in the morning. But seriously, you're doing a fantastic job. I'm excited and mad. The only story I've really liked so far on Fiction Press is one called London Calling but yours is pissing me off in all the right ways.
10/11/2014 c4 Mistrelia of the Ice
Seriously, fucking kill him. Brutally. I promise you I will not shed one tear. Fuck, I'll even clap and showcase this damn story everywhere I go.
Seriously, fucking kill him. Brutally. I promise you I will not shed one tear. Fuck, I'll even clap and showcase this damn story everywhere I go.