for I'm Quite Afraid So1/29/2009 c13 
8deshaunwalker
i am like totally in love with dylan! in my head hes this really hott guy with long hair named andrew. im sure uve heard of him. anyway i think this story is awesome and that u should finish writing this one before starting another.
8deshaunwalkeri am like totally in love with dylan! in my head hes this really hott guy with long hair named andrew. im sure uve heard of him. anyway i think this story is awesome and that u should finish writing this one before starting another.
1/25/2009 c12 Eboni B. yo crazy friend
this chapter was cool, sorry it took so long to update and sorry I don't feel like typing anything else. Love it, and can you hit your other friend with the rest of your story so I can read it, fool! lol!
this chapter was cool, sorry it took so long to update and sorry I don't feel like typing anything else. Love it, and can you hit your other friend with the rest of your story so I can read it, fool! lol!
1/19/2009 c8 4E. Collins
I really like this chapter and hope that I have time to finish reading this later. Poor Jessalyn! Anyway, I"m tired so I'm going to go to bed now.
Tootles,
Roselyn
4E. CollinsI really like this chapter and hope that I have time to finish reading this later. Poor Jessalyn! Anyway, I"m tired so I'm going to go to bed now.
Tootles,
Roselyn
1/11/2009 c10 2Classychik
Im mad you made Jessalyn and Dylan do the do. And she is hilariously dumb with the doorknob thing. This chapter was the shit. Oh and french people went out to the sea and ate my cheesecake muffins along with my black red booty monkeys.
~Classychik!:D
~What a shit suckeer!lol (insider people)
2ClassychikIm mad you made Jessalyn and Dylan do the do. And she is hilariously dumb with the doorknob thing. This chapter was the shit. Oh and french people went out to the sea and ate my cheesecake muffins along with my black red booty monkeys.
~Classychik!:D
~What a shit suckeer!lol (insider people)
12/30/2008 c9 Classychik
At the end a little of you I could hear saying that last sentence! What Dylan did in the beginning was so G! and I can't beleive she really was abused that long. Anyways that was a good chapter and sorry it took me so long to review! Love you crazy biotch! (I knw her, so don't be saying nothing people who are reading this review!) toodles!:)
~Classychik!:D
At the end a little of you I could hear saying that last sentence! What Dylan did in the beginning was so G! and I can't beleive she really was abused that long. Anyways that was a good chapter and sorry it took me so long to review! Love you crazy biotch! (I knw her, so don't be saying nothing people who are reading this review!) toodles!:)
~Classychik!:D
12/29/2008 c9 2Chlobuggy
I feel really bad for Jessalyn. And I really like your story, but as for constructive criticism (sorry, I can't spell for anything) I have a little bit. I got the feeling that Jess was being hit when Jamie first came to the house, but when ahe and Dillon first started going out, she didn't think about her past at all like she is now. It seems like you all of a sudden got this grand idea, in reality, someone who had gone through that much would have more of the "voice" in her head before and more fears. She wouldn't immediatelt say "yes!" when they started going out and then be all hunkydory about it. She'd be scared, you need to show more fear in her mind in the previous chapters.
But enough criticism (again with the spelling) it's all around very good!
2ChlobuggyI feel really bad for Jessalyn. And I really like your story, but as for constructive criticism (sorry, I can't spell for anything) I have a little bit. I got the feeling that Jess was being hit when Jamie first came to the house, but when ahe and Dillon first started going out, she didn't think about her past at all like she is now. It seems like you all of a sudden got this grand idea, in reality, someone who had gone through that much would have more of the "voice" in her head before and more fears. She wouldn't immediatelt say "yes!" when they started going out and then be all hunkydory about it. She'd be scared, you need to show more fear in her mind in the previous chapters.
But enough criticism (again with the spelling) it's all around very good!
12/28/2008 c9 Zwidon
I loved it it was really good, the whole getting mad over forgetting the sixth month anniversary seemed a little childish but i loved it it was sad but good...
I loved it it was really good, the whole getting mad over forgetting the sixth month anniversary seemed a little childish but i loved it it was sad but good...