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3/8/2009 c1 10Elephant-Artist
very good repetition. If you use more descriptive words then you will probably get more reviews. Please read and review my stuff.
9/30/2008 c1 159between the lyrics
there's something about this piece that i just absolutely love. i can't pinpoint it exactly since it's all the elements of this piece wrapped into one. keep it up!
9/29/2008 c1 50In the Rye
no offense to you, but i think it's just awful when people post songs on here, mostly because the lyrics are nothing without the music the majority of the time.

i personally don't find this intriguing or good as a poem, and it would probably sound better with music to accompany it.

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