for The Storm11/19/2008 c1 
56from beneath the bell jar
Lovely! Great imagery and amazing opening line - definitely eye-catchig. I really love this: "Listens to these tangled words and answer back the storm". Great piece.
Maybe you could check out one of my new poems, "star swallower" or "siren song"? I would definitely appreciate your feedback.
56from beneath the bell jarLovely! Great imagery and amazing opening line - definitely eye-catchig. I really love this: "Listens to these tangled words and answer back the storm". Great piece.
Maybe you could check out one of my new poems, "star swallower" or "siren song"? I would definitely appreciate your feedback.
11/2/2008 c1 236mezzie
delicious.
p.s. thanks for still keeping track of my writing after all this time. i appreciate the feedback :)
~mezzie
236mezziedelicious.
p.s. thanks for still keeping track of my writing after all this time. i appreciate the feedback :)
~mezzie
10/7/2008 c1 24Mistress of Eternity
This tastes good on the tongue, though I'm having trouble seeing what it was, really, that you meant. I am sure my interpretation of it is far from the truth.
"Letting the rain soak through her outstretched arms"
Lovely as always.
-Anna
24Mistress of EternityThis tastes good on the tongue, though I'm having trouble seeing what it was, really, that you meant. I am sure my interpretation of it is far from the truth.
"Letting the rain soak through her outstretched arms"
Lovely as always.
-Anna
9/30/2008 c1 cling peach
and answers back the storm.
I love that.
and answers back the storm.
I love that.