
10/18/2008 c1
45deefective
Oh, how crude. This made me laugh though but I guess it's because I can get this type of humor. Well, the rhyming thing helped you. It made it seem like one of those little songs that they sing in bars when everyone is drunk. A good thing considering the topic. Also, I actually like the fact that this is actually funny and not just nasty. [Well, mostly] That line there:
"And don't you dare go near my ass, I'm not that kind of guy."
HA.HA. I actually laughed. Nicely done.
-Dee, from the Review Marathon.
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Oh, how crude. This made me laugh though but I guess it's because I can get this type of humor. Well, the rhyming thing helped you. It made it seem like one of those little songs that they sing in bars when everyone is drunk. A good thing considering the topic. Also, I actually like the fact that this is actually funny and not just nasty. [Well, mostly] That line there:
"And don't you dare go near my ass, I'm not that kind of guy."
HA.HA. I actually laughed. Nicely done.
-Dee, from the Review Marathon.
[Check up on it. Link's in my profile.]