for Checkmate10/1/2008 c1 dOrKy-GuRl03
that was good..i feel so bad for her...its good..i like it..good one shot...so in the end she died because she was sick and couldn' tell him because he is a player or something...well anyways that is sad...
that was good..i feel so bad for her...its good..i like it..good one shot...so in the end she died because she was sick and couldn' tell him because he is a player or something...well anyways that is sad...
10/1/2008 c1 sunflower.kiss
I REALLY liked it. I think I'm starting to favor really short, impressive one-shots like these. :)
I REALLY liked it. I think I'm starting to favor really short, impressive one-shots like these. :)
10/1/2008 c1 The Writer 37
Reminded me of how romance is just a game and your either ahead, or behind. It was simple, short, and directly to the point. Great.
Reminded me of how romance is just a game and your either ahead, or behind. It was simple, short, and directly to the point. Great.
10/1/2008 c1 
5AmiableAngel
Yeah, it was pretty random. Interesting though...
I loved the beginning, before the character died. And the last line was really creepy...
5AmiableAngelYeah, it was pretty random. Interesting though...
I loved the beginning, before the character died. And the last line was really creepy...