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10/1/2008 c1 dOrKy-GuRl03
that was good..i feel so bad for her...its good..i like it..good one shot...so in the end she died because she was sick and couldn' tell him because he is a player or something...well anyways that is sad...
10/1/2008 c1 sunflower.kiss
I REALLY liked it. I think I'm starting to favor really short, impressive one-shots like these. :)
10/1/2008 c1 The Writer 37
Reminded me of how romance is just a game and your either ahead, or behind. It was simple, short, and directly to the point. Great.
10/1/2008 c1 5AmiableAngel
Yeah, it was pretty random. Interesting though...

I loved the beginning, before the character died. And the last line was really creepy...
10/1/2008 c1 3Pot
Ehmigesh, I love it. The ending's ideal. Good job!



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