for Social Services and the Shoe12/25/2009 c1 Icyfire4w5
Even though this play is rather short, it's so easy to understand, plus it's also very enjoyable.
Even though this play is rather short, it's so easy to understand, plus it's also very enjoyable.
5/24/2009 c1 
11Lizabellhanson05
Very, very funny...your sense of humor is delightful! Congrats! You just made my favorites!
11Lizabellhanson05Very, very funny...your sense of humor is delightful! Congrats! You just made my favorites!
1/22/2009 c1 23Jem the writer
Hehe, that was gloriously funny! I love the modern twist on the nursery rhyme. Nice look at it from a mature and informed perspective!
~JEM~
23Jem the writerHehe, that was gloriously funny! I love the modern twist on the nursery rhyme. Nice look at it from a mature and informed perspective!
~JEM~
10/19/2008 c1 1Just Nilla
Love it! I always find myself chuckling at your writing. Great job!
I especially love the format. I'm a screenplay freak. Love writing them and reading them.
Love, love, love it, Danielle!
~Jen
1Just NillaLove it! I always find myself chuckling at your writing. Great job!
I especially love the format. I'm a screenplay freak. Love writing them and reading them.
Love, love, love it, Danielle!
~Jen
10/4/2008 c1 29They Call Me Mimii
sorry it took me so long to review lampie. This is great, haha. Is it the only scene? because I'd love to see more! Perhaps Agatha will find an old man?
Great play, thanks for the laughs
29They Call Me Mimiisorry it took me so long to review lampie. This is great, haha. Is it the only scene? because I'd love to see more! Perhaps Agatha will find an old man?
Great play, thanks for the laughs
10/4/2008 c1 14Aria Zilfier
Brilliant! There should be more Social Services and...(the tuffet! or something! haha)
:D
14Aria ZilfierBrilliant! There should be more Social Services and...(the tuffet! or something! haha)
:D
10/2/2008 c1 Lady Pendragon
Love it! This made me laugh so hard! Amazing piece of work, I really like the concept.
Love it! This made me laugh so hard! Amazing piece of work, I really like the concept.
10/2/2008 c1 1FemaleJonas
hahahah
LOVED IT!
poor Agatha tho, the stupid social worker didn't beleive her!
and now she has to go back to all those dang kids in that smelly shoe! :)
1FemaleJonashahahah
LOVED IT!
poor Agatha tho, the stupid social worker didn't beleive her!
and now she has to go back to all those dang kids in that smelly shoe! :)
10/2/2008 c1 108Qzie
Beautiful, BEAUTIFUL formatting! Although when you have stuff in parentheses, you write it like a sentence, capitalization included.
XD Oh man, I was laughing the whole way through. I'd love to see this performed. "There is no Old Man!" I don't think that's what people are talking about when they mention the Virgin Mother... :D Joke. Very bad joke.
There were a couple typos:
(At the beginning) SOCAIL SERVICES WORKER
"(stands up and walks to DR. SOCIAL SERVICES WORKER stands up but stays by the desk)" I think you meant CR instead of DR. I was looking at it for a moment, thinking, "Doctor?" And then it clicked. :)
That was hilarious. The Old Lady... it had to be done and you were the right person to do it. :) Fantastic job. Lots of cookies for you. ^^ Chat later. -Qzie
108QzieBeautiful, BEAUTIFUL formatting! Although when you have stuff in parentheses, you write it like a sentence, capitalization included.
XD Oh man, I was laughing the whole way through. I'd love to see this performed. "There is no Old Man!" I don't think that's what people are talking about when they mention the Virgin Mother... :D Joke. Very bad joke.
There were a couple typos:
(At the beginning) SOCAIL SERVICES WORKER
"(stands up and walks to DR. SOCIAL SERVICES WORKER stands up but stays by the desk)" I think you meant CR instead of DR. I was looking at it for a moment, thinking, "Doctor?" And then it clicked. :)
That was hilarious. The Old Lady... it had to be done and you were the right person to do it. :) Fantastic job. Lots of cookies for you. ^^ Chat later. -Qzie