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10/12/2010 c1 Genato
this looks very much like a snippet.. a snippet from where, exactly? very curious. :)
10/2/2008 c1 3Mellifluence
A lovely one-shot. I loved how you managed to make it bittersweet but simple, without the triteness of melodrama.

My only suggestion is that you could place commas rather than full stops in certain places (e.g. "So they’ll savor these small tastes of the past, the glimpses of what could have been.") - as the abruptness of certain phrases occasionally jars the eye.

Keep up the good work.

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