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12/9/2008 c1 102The Hippie Nerd
If there is some hidden or subtle meaning to this, it's not coming through- but that doesn't stop me from liking it. You jump around to a lot of little interesting little fragments that somehow come together as a whole. I like the unpredictable nature of the poem. Yep, yep, avant-garde's definitely the right word for it. Great wording, flow, sly touch of humour, and a complete lack of inhibition towards randomness. Good job!
10/17/2008 c1 arcane devices
I'm trying to make coherent sense out of the piece but I find it hard to do so because the poem seems to be here, there and everywhere. ;)

The wording, and the diction on this piece is simply wonderful as always. Keep writing Cindy, this is one of the most avant-garde piece I've read from you by far and stay sharp.

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