
11/27/2009 c5
14Beautiful Destination
Love the story. I also want a Colin as well, but that may just be asking for too much :P

Love the story. I also want a Colin as well, but that may just be asking for too much :P
11/18/2009 c5
1Robyn2250
Oh! This is enough to make me want to quit college now, try my hand at romance and hope that I will find a Colin. *fans self* My, he's a very sexy man...Wonderful job on that. I will be checking out some of your other stories now. :)

Oh! This is enough to make me want to quit college now, try my hand at romance and hope that I will find a Colin. *fans self* My, he's a very sexy man...Wonderful job on that. I will be checking out some of your other stories now. :)
10/19/2009 c5 animegirl214
haha aw :) that was really cute! it was only 5 chapters.. but i loved it! :D :D :D
haha aw :) that was really cute! it was only 5 chapters.. but i loved it! :D :D :D
10/12/2009 c5
10Itsa Mia
Oh.
My.
God.
I feel like the teenager in this chapter that ended up just squealing how much she loved it. Because I loved it. I liked how they got together anyway. I mean of course that would happen. But still.
And, pshyeah virgins have the craziest and most romantic fantasies. They write about the romance they wish they had :D
This was so much fun to read. You write really well. I love perfect grammar. By default I love the people who use it. So you can guess where I'm getting. :D
I had a hard time imagining Colin, simply because you described him as so much bigger than Emma, and I ended up imagining this hulking giant of a man, and this tiny little lady, but I'm like... no...I think they're regular sized .

Oh.
My.
God.
I feel like the teenager in this chapter that ended up just squealing how much she loved it. Because I loved it. I liked how they got together anyway. I mean of course that would happen. But still.
And, pshyeah virgins have the craziest and most romantic fantasies. They write about the romance they wish they had :D
This was so much fun to read. You write really well. I love perfect grammar. By default I love the people who use it. So you can guess where I'm getting. :D
I had a hard time imagining Colin, simply because you described him as so much bigger than Emma, and I ended up imagining this hulking giant of a man, and this tiny little lady, but I'm like... no...I think they're regular sized .
9/22/2009 c2
1hairspray cliche
I really liked this. The characters are so funny! Haha... But I know when I am drunk I definitely CANNOT keep a serious conversation... I am usually wasted.

I really liked this. The characters are so funny! Haha... But I know when I am drunk I definitely CANNOT keep a serious conversation... I am usually wasted.
8/15/2009 c5 azer
aww so cute.
Would have been cute if the fans had gotten a little preview ;-)
aww so cute.
Would have been cute if the fans had gotten a little preview ;-)
6/10/2009 c5 Dee
Aw I loved it! Really good short story!
Aw I loved it! Really good short story!
4/25/2009 c5
23Jem the writer
This was totally sweet and incredibly awesome! I loved that it was so short; it made it an easy and enjoyable read!
Definitely one of the best shorts I've read on fictionpress; it was a great plotline and great characters! It was super sweet! (Going straight onto my faves!)
~JEM~

This was totally sweet and incredibly awesome! I loved that it was so short; it made it an easy and enjoyable read!
Definitely one of the best shorts I've read on fictionpress; it was a great plotline and great characters! It was super sweet! (Going straight onto my faves!)
~JEM~