for Sound of Pulling Heaven down3/6/2009 c4 
1UKKitty
Hey there,
This is a really interesting start and I hope you'll come back to it. It's lovely to see the central theme so far the love of a mother for her child, rather than between two adults.
I'm guessing from your last update you might have lost the heart to continue this story, but I hope you'll either come back to it or be inspired to start something else - it's very atmospheric and I'd love to see you do more.
Kitty
1UKKittyHey there,
This is a really interesting start and I hope you'll come back to it. It's lovely to see the central theme so far the love of a mother for her child, rather than between two adults.
I'm guessing from your last update you might have lost the heart to continue this story, but I hope you'll either come back to it or be inspired to start something else - it's very atmospheric and I'd love to see you do more.
Kitty
11/30/2008 c4 1kjsdkfadsfa
You should have made the first three chapters into one chapter...the prologue. Geddit? And make it obvious of when and/or where the story takes place. That way, if you ever get published, there will be no complications! And more dialogue, please. :D
Mwah~!
1kjsdkfadsfaYou should have made the first three chapters into one chapter...the prologue. Geddit? And make it obvious of when and/or where the story takes place. That way, if you ever get published, there will be no complications! And more dialogue, please. :D
Mwah~!
10/6/2008 c3 VVastedtime
AWESOME! LOVED IT! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! YEAH! DON'T YOU LIKE CAPS? HEH! WELL...UPDATE!
vvastedtime
AWESOME! LOVED IT! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! YEAH! DON'T YOU LIKE CAPS? HEH! WELL...UPDATE!
vvastedtime
10/5/2008 c2 2MoonlightBliss
I like it a lot. Maybe though you should write in paragraphs. That may make the chapters seem shorter. But then it would seem more like a story. Overall, it was fairly good.
2MoonlightBlissI like it a lot. Maybe though you should write in paragraphs. That may make the chapters seem shorter. But then it would seem more like a story. Overall, it was fairly good.