6/5/2016 c31 Anonymous
Leaving your story hanging like that and unfinished is possible the most irresponsible thing a writer could do. You could have at least finished it. I hope that if you are still writing, you are at least finishing them properly like any other decent one would do. This is so disappointing, especially because you had a very good one going. Good luck with your writing; you will need it if this is how you continue.
Leaving your story hanging like that and unfinished is possible the most irresponsible thing a writer could do. You could have at least finished it. I hope that if you are still writing, you are at least finishing them properly like any other decent one would do. This is so disappointing, especially because you had a very good one going. Good luck with your writing; you will need it if this is how you continue.
2/13/2014 c30 1soulless aesthetic
Okay , so the first ending was super sad and then you tell me this whole time THEY WERE COUSINS?! EWWWW! I ACTUALLY SUPPORTED THEIR RELATIONSHIP! That is like the worst author troll of all time.
Okay , so the first ending was super sad and then you tell me this whole time THEY WERE COUSINS?! EWWWW! I ACTUALLY SUPPORTED THEIR RELATIONSHIP! That is like the worst author troll of all time.
12/8/2013 c30 1Mr. Oompa Loompa
Now they can't get together X(
I really like Luke and Addie as a couple, but the ending was hilarious! :D
Now they can't get together X(
I really like Luke and Addie as a couple, but the ending was hilarious! :D
5/31/2013 c30 BBRAEFATKITTY
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You could have salvaged the relationship! They could have gotten back together and MARRIED AND ONE DAY HAD LITTLE ADDIE AND LUKE JR.S! But seriously could you make an epilogue or sequel? It was my favorite story till the last chapter! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! Pleeeeeeeeeeease? *puppy dog eyes*!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You could have salvaged the relationship! They could have gotten back together and MARRIED AND ONE DAY HAD LITTLE ADDIE AND LUKE JR.S! But seriously could you make an epilogue or sequel? It was my favorite story till the last chapter! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! Pleeeeeeeeeeease? *puppy dog eyes*!
6/30/2012 c8 Guest
Oh god, Jake is hilarious! By far my favorite character!
Oh god, Jake is hilarious! By far my favorite character!
11/7/2010 c32 6LaughsWithTears
Why did they end up as cousins? WHY? This was supposed to be a ROMANCE story! Not some incestual freak show! *Sob* Why?...
Why did they end up as cousins? WHY? This was supposed to be a ROMANCE story! Not some incestual freak show! *Sob* Why?...
11/6/2010 c32 Admins Pls Delete Me
W-w-w-w-what? You're not gonna finish it? I love this story! You can't just end it! You can't! It made me so happy, and then I almost cried, and then I was happy again, and now I feel like crying! You have got to go on with this story! You can't leave me hanging! Please, please! I am on my knees, I am begging you! You can't end this story, it was so filled with emotion! And it relayed that emotion onto me! That is a true work of art! You have to complete it, I am gonna cry if you don't!
W-w-w-w-what? You're not gonna finish it? I love this story! You can't just end it! You can't! It made me so happy, and then I almost cried, and then I was happy again, and now I feel like crying! You have got to go on with this story! You can't leave me hanging! Please, please! I am on my knees, I am begging you! You can't end this story, it was so filled with emotion! And it relayed that emotion onto me! That is a true work of art! You have to complete it, I am gonna cry if you don't!
9/4/2010 c30 Ayesha
no. what hapened 2 the rest of the story? i was rely enjpying it lol.
no. what hapened 2 the rest of the story? i was rely enjpying it lol.
6/29/2010 c32 Z
Are you ever going to write any more?
I mean if that was supposed to be an ending it was the worst one ever!
Are you ever going to write any more?
I mean if that was supposed to be an ending it was the worst one ever!
6/5/2010 c27 Rosie May Jane
Daamn, this chapter almost made me cry.
Which is pretty damn amazing considering I read about an average of 3 books a week and I've only cried at one book in my life :) (It was Private Peaceful, in case you're wondering)
Amazing story :)
Daamn, this chapter almost made me cry.
Which is pretty damn amazing considering I read about an average of 3 books a week and I've only cried at one book in my life :) (It was Private Peaceful, in case you're wondering)
Amazing story :)