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10/7/2008 c1 8Written
wow, great piece. I'm glad you didn't resort to stereotypes, because it made the story a lot deeper. I'm a squeamish girl, so I almost tried to close my eyes when it got near the end, but I made it! and the end was really nice.. sort of peaceful. well done.
10/5/2008 c1 JaveHarron
Hell of a story. It's good to see a military writer that doesn't rely on the caricatures that war stories often employ. Well written and good characterization.

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