
11/18/2009 c1 Ever heard of a Dictionary
Wonderful poem. It's touching, both mentally and emotionally. I'm sure man of the readers would be able to connect with this. Wonderful job.
~Ever heard of a Dictionary~
Wonderful poem. It's touching, both mentally and emotionally. I'm sure man of the readers would be able to connect with this. Wonderful job.
~Ever heard of a Dictionary~
11/18/2009 c1
3Chimerical Knave
Lets see...lets see...where to start...where to start.
Oh why bother! Its too much pessimism for me to hanle altogether by myself...
I need a hanky t dry my tears of sorrow and hate...this sad truth...This sad and awful truth about the world.
What has it come to? Not the end yet...but, oh how I wish it were the end...the end to all this inhumanity...this selfishness and insanity that we toil through everyday.
But I am one who is optimistic in any situation...though I may make it through very aggrevisely, tere is without a doubt that I am optimistic. Though a couple of my stories may point otherwise so who knows...maybe in al reality, according to Freud, I am actually the most pessimistic person you could have ever met. Why, you ask? How, you ask? Because my conscious mind is suppressing my unconscious mind...my unconscious mind has loads of pessimism but my conscious mind represses it and covers it up with optimism...according to Freud of course.
Anyhow...this poem was a nice little tidbit of truth and pessmism, although I must digress that I feel slightly hurt by the fact that you did not mention my "group" as you've already heard frm me.
But no matter...nice job
Best Wishes,
Chris

Lets see...lets see...where to start...where to start.
Oh why bother! Its too much pessimism for me to hanle altogether by myself...
I need a hanky t dry my tears of sorrow and hate...this sad truth...This sad and awful truth about the world.
What has it come to? Not the end yet...but, oh how I wish it were the end...the end to all this inhumanity...this selfishness and insanity that we toil through everyday.
But I am one who is optimistic in any situation...though I may make it through very aggrevisely, tere is without a doubt that I am optimistic. Though a couple of my stories may point otherwise so who knows...maybe in al reality, according to Freud, I am actually the most pessimistic person you could have ever met. Why, you ask? How, you ask? Because my conscious mind is suppressing my unconscious mind...my unconscious mind has loads of pessimism but my conscious mind represses it and covers it up with optimism...according to Freud of course.
Anyhow...this poem was a nice little tidbit of truth and pessmism, although I must digress that I feel slightly hurt by the fact that you did not mention my "group" as you've already heard frm me.
But no matter...nice job
Best Wishes,
Chris
10/19/2008 c1
8Irresistible Apple
Absolutely powerful and chilling, yet subtle. I know I'm being extremely hypocritical by saying this, but if I were you I wouldn't change anything at all.

Absolutely powerful and chilling, yet subtle. I know I'm being extremely hypocritical by saying this, but if I were you I wouldn't change anything at all.
10/6/2008 c1
22instantramen
Woah.
I haven't read anything this good in a /long/ time.
Excellent. Epic kudos. You rock. This was gorgeous and compelling and all kinds of other words that I can't think of right now 'cause I'm so impressed.
You did a wonderful job relating to these people and their situations, and so briefly... Just... Yeah. Awesome. I'll stop now. Sorry I'm a total dork.

Woah.
I haven't read anything this good in a /long/ time.
Excellent. Epic kudos. You rock. This was gorgeous and compelling and all kinds of other words that I can't think of right now 'cause I'm so impressed.
You did a wonderful job relating to these people and their situations, and so briefly... Just... Yeah. Awesome. I'll stop now. Sorry I'm a total dork.