for The Hunt of Houses10/6/2008 c1 
26Elim
I love your description. And your sense of humor. "or maybe it was the fact that their oldest daughter's room was an office." :) I love it.
One little thing. At the end of the 9th paragraph and the beginning of the 10th, "fell threw" should really be "fell through." One of those things that the spell check wouldn't catch because "threw" is definitely a word. :)
Funny, and very real.
-Elim
26ElimI love your description. And your sense of humor. "or maybe it was the fact that their oldest daughter's room was an office." :) I love it.
One little thing. At the end of the 9th paragraph and the beginning of the 10th, "fell threw" should really be "fell through." One of those things that the spell check wouldn't catch because "threw" is definitely a word. :)
Funny, and very real.
-Elim