for My Fragmented Fairytale5/4/2022 c1 Guest
Ahhh. So sweet! Caitlin is the best friend we girls need. Thank you for the happily ever after :)
Ahhh. So sweet! Caitlin is the best friend we girls need. Thank you for the happily ever after :)
9/24/2013 c1 Guest
Umm...wow. This was adorable, I loved it. The only thing is...the guy is SUPER nice, but I'm not sure guys are capable of talking about their feelings as openly as this one.
Umm...wow. This was adorable, I loved it. The only thing is...the guy is SUPER nice, but I'm not sure guys are capable of talking about their feelings as openly as this one.
9/7/2013 c1 insert name here
squideeeeeee! it was so cute...
and plus, you're Australian! Yay!
squideeeeeee! it was so cute...
and plus, you're Australian! Yay!
1/4/2013 c1 katmelnyk
Adorable...though I found it a bit rushed at the ending... LOVED the story though! And the ending!
Adorable...though I found it a bit rushed at the ending... LOVED the story though! And the ending!
10/27/2012 c1 EverEverAfter
Once again, I love the sharp witticisms and humor in the story. I feel like the initial part about her siblings was irrelevant and unnecessary to the rest of the plot. It would have made more sense if one of the siblings that you described played more of a role in the plot.
However, this story made me laugh, and it was written well, with smooth dialogues. It made me realise that sometimes, cliches aren't that bad! :)
Once again, I love the sharp witticisms and humor in the story. I feel like the initial part about her siblings was irrelevant and unnecessary to the rest of the plot. It would have made more sense if one of the siblings that you described played more of a role in the plot.
However, this story made me laugh, and it was written well, with smooth dialogues. It made me realise that sometimes, cliches aren't that bad! :)
9/16/2012 c1 heal me forever
Excuse me for wanting to melt into a puddle at the sight of a guy pouring his heart out to his German dis i adore him nd laughed like HELL ha ha! :P
And of course! Who could forget? And we all lived happily ever made me a fangal nd feel damn HAPPY
great one totally lovely
ur stries r like AWESUM i have read dem all nd of course dey r BANG ON god bless (:
Excuse me for wanting to melt into a puddle at the sight of a guy pouring his heart out to his German dis i adore him nd laughed like HELL ha ha! :P
And of course! Who could forget? And we all lived happily ever made me a fangal nd feel damn HAPPY
great one totally lovely
ur stries r like AWESUM i have read dem all nd of course dey r BANG ON god bless (:
6/6/2012 c1 YourNewBestFriend
I'm Aussie and I think it's just awesome how you are to and your not afraid to show it. I get pretty confused with all the American stuff that goes on and it's pretty awesome to come across an amazing, hilarious and Aussie writer.
I love reading all your stories. Oh god their funny. Anyway I'm just gonna go now and read the remaining stories I haven't read yet.
Later.
I'm Aussie and I think it's just awesome how you are to and your not afraid to show it. I get pretty confused with all the American stuff that goes on and it's pretty awesome to come across an amazing, hilarious and Aussie writer.
I love reading all your stories. Oh god their funny. Anyway I'm just gonna go now and read the remaining stories I haven't read yet.
Later.
11/17/2011 c1 Sara
*sigh* Jeremy sounds like a perfect prince charming. I love Cally's quirky romance tendancies. This was just so cute!
*sigh* Jeremy sounds like a perfect prince charming. I love Cally's quirky romance tendancies. This was just so cute!
7/20/2011 c1 
3SweetSarah2
Very cute. Like the references. And because I'm a New Zealander I actually already know what Home and Away is. :)
Witty, humorous and cute. Definitely keep writing.
Only the lack of commas, run-on sentences and extra-extra-EXTRA long sentences dulled this story. Other than that it was really good. :D
3SweetSarah2Very cute. Like the references. And because I'm a New Zealander I actually already know what Home and Away is. :)
Witty, humorous and cute. Definitely keep writing.
Only the lack of commas, run-on sentences and extra-extra-EXTRA long sentences dulled this story. Other than that it was really good. :D
6/4/2011 c1 8mixed signals
Cute ^^ And I loved the beginning especially. :) I wanna find the one someday too.
8mixed signalsCute ^^ And I loved the beginning especially. :) I wanna find the one someday too.
4/8/2011 c1 1casey-kent
loved the story, it's cute. I'm not Australian, but I watch Home and Away... thank God for "Australia Network- from our world to yours" :))
1casey-kentloved the story, it's cute. I'm not Australian, but I watch Home and Away... thank God for "Australia Network- from our world to yours" :))