
8/19/2009 c2
8Jessiy
I love your story, I think it's great and I can't wait to read more. It's defiently exciting.
One constructive criticism note: I'm sorry but I didn't feel yo've explained the characters to well. I feel you're just looking at the now with little character analysis like what they are like, more to do with the older were (Sorry, for the life of me I can't remember his name). Don't get me wrong.
Still, I loved it and can't wait to read more! Jessiy x

I love your story, I think it's great and I can't wait to read more. It's defiently exciting.
One constructive criticism note: I'm sorry but I didn't feel yo've explained the characters to well. I feel you're just looking at the now with little character analysis like what they are like, more to do with the older were (Sorry, for the life of me I can't remember his name). Don't get me wrong.
Still, I loved it and can't wait to read more! Jessiy x
3/28/2009 c2 Poptart Guava King
Very interested. I want to see how this continues... will you be continuing it?
Very interested. I want to see how this continues... will you be continuing it?
12/28/2008 c2
8Annabel Wynters
This si really good! I can't wait for more! I really like Aidren, he's awesome.

This si really good! I can't wait for more! I really like Aidren, he's awesome.
11/26/2008 c2
12whitetyger123
OMG! This is an awesome story! And they turn into leopards? That's so cute lol. I'll definatly keep reading this story for sure. It's too cool not to lol.

OMG! This is an awesome story! And they turn into leopards? That's so cute lol. I'll definatly keep reading this story for sure. It's too cool not to lol.
10/31/2008 c2
1They Call Me Soysauce
Ooh ooh, another story! Sounds really interesting... I'll be looking forward to updates from this story too! :D

Ooh ooh, another story! Sounds really interesting... I'll be looking forward to updates from this story too! :D
10/26/2008 c2
17JtheChosen1
this is awesome! i luv the 2 different prologue perspectives! keep up the amazing work, any good were-story is always appreciated here!

this is awesome! i luv the 2 different prologue perspectives! keep up the amazing work, any good were-story is always appreciated here!