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6dwarfperson
Update! This is so good! I want to know what happens on the trip! Argh the suspense is killing me! Please update, I honestly love this story more than I should... Please? Dwarf
6dwarfpersonUpdate! This is so good! I want to know what happens on the trip! Argh the suspense is killing me! Please update, I honestly love this story more than I should... Please? Dwarf
4/23/2009 c7 sarcasm is my middle name
Hehe... wearing the underwear and bras?
Wow, maybe they're secretly gay!
I've always wanted to have a gay best friend... i heard they're really good at shopping...
Anyways, great chapter!
I especially loved the bit involving Zac's photo album!
Hehe... wearing the underwear and bras?
Wow, maybe they're secretly gay!
I've always wanted to have a gay best friend... i heard they're really good at shopping...
Anyways, great chapter!
I especially loved the bit involving Zac's photo album!
3/10/2009 c6 2DanBan.E
Short review. I sick.
Good good good chapter. I can't belive Penelope smashed her self silly, and how Roxy didn't get that mad at Ace about it, even if she and Penelope aren't friends. I think Riley would have been able to see that she was a bit drunk when they went into the room together.
I liked the kiss. It was cute. Even if only on the cheek.
Zac pissed me off. He who was the perfect cutie boy, went and smoked. Poo him. Victoria is an ass. I hate her ugly guts. Kind of.
I like how Evans likes Zac, even if he sucks. A lot. They better get together! Pwease? Good job updating, too! Do it again!
Love, Dani
2DanBan.EShort review. I sick.
Good good good chapter. I can't belive Penelope smashed her self silly, and how Roxy didn't get that mad at Ace about it, even if she and Penelope aren't friends. I think Riley would have been able to see that she was a bit drunk when they went into the room together.
I liked the kiss. It was cute. Even if only on the cheek.
Zac pissed me off. He who was the perfect cutie boy, went and smoked. Poo him. Victoria is an ass. I hate her ugly guts. Kind of.
I like how Evans likes Zac, even if he sucks. A lot. They better get together! Pwease? Good job updating, too! Do it again!
Love, Dani
3/3/2009 c5 DanBan.E
Wow! Great chapter! Seriously, your writing is really good. I'm shocked by the review count. It's realy good! I like the characters, but I feel the boys need more personality. I mean, Ace is obviously a play boy, but what else? Isn't there more to him? I guess as the story goes on, we'll find out, but... Yeah, haha. Some of the girls need it, too. I mean, Roxy's cool, and I can see her personality to a degree, but she does seem to not have many interests or things like that. I cannot wait for the next chapter! I do think the end was a bit overdramatic. Of course dances for teens are the biggest deals in the world, right next to what to wear to school and which boy to sleep with next, but one dance? A bit much. I love how Penelope was so sweet, even if I think it was disguised. She can't really be that sweet, she's gotta be playing him or something! Amber is a bitch, but not overly done, and I think that's really good. Great job! Update soon?
Love, Dani
Wow! Great chapter! Seriously, your writing is really good. I'm shocked by the review count. It's realy good! I like the characters, but I feel the boys need more personality. I mean, Ace is obviously a play boy, but what else? Isn't there more to him? I guess as the story goes on, we'll find out, but... Yeah, haha. Some of the girls need it, too. I mean, Roxy's cool, and I can see her personality to a degree, but she does seem to not have many interests or things like that. I cannot wait for the next chapter! I do think the end was a bit overdramatic. Of course dances for teens are the biggest deals in the world, right next to what to wear to school and which boy to sleep with next, but one dance? A bit much. I love how Penelope was so sweet, even if I think it was disguised. She can't really be that sweet, she's gotta be playing him or something! Amber is a bitch, but not overly done, and I think that's really good. Great job! Update soon?
Love, Dani
12/28/2008 c4 sarcasm is my middle name
omg, there's so much drama, so much tension! you gotta love a good story! please update... i want to see who roxy likes!
omg, there's so much drama, so much tension! you gotta love a good story! please update... i want to see who roxy likes!
11/30/2008 c4 2DanBan.E
Great job! It was really funny! It's hard imagine anyone actually pretending to be a stripper, but you made easy and hilarious! It's a great idea for a Evening Program! Here are my overall comments, though.
I think you need a main character. You don't have to do it first person POV, but maybe have a basis, like Roxy observing what was going on, or something like that.
Riley is hilarious, but I don't want him with Penelope! She seems so fake! Like she's a jerk for a bit, then with Evans she's all, oh, whoa is me! Sigh, he should like me... Riley is way to good for her. WAY TO GOOD!
I want Roxy to get with someone! Hook her up! Haha, ya...
AMAZING JOB! UPDATE!
Love, Dani
2DanBan.EGreat job! It was really funny! It's hard imagine anyone actually pretending to be a stripper, but you made easy and hilarious! It's a great idea for a Evening Program! Here are my overall comments, though.
I think you need a main character. You don't have to do it first person POV, but maybe have a basis, like Roxy observing what was going on, or something like that.
Riley is hilarious, but I don't want him with Penelope! She seems so fake! Like she's a jerk for a bit, then with Evans she's all, oh, whoa is me! Sigh, he should like me... Riley is way to good for her. WAY TO GOOD!
I want Roxy to get with someone! Hook her up! Haha, ya...
AMAZING JOB! UPDATE!
Love, Dani
11/19/2008 c3 2DanBan.E
Now I understand the Pepto-Bismol thing! I feel so dumb! Haha! Great job, your writing is honestly fantastical. Very proud! Great length, and I can't wait to see more! Just make sure the other characters are as well developed as some. Riley... Sigh, gorgeous...
Love, Dani
2DanBan.ENow I understand the Pepto-Bismol thing! I feel so dumb! Haha! Great job, your writing is honestly fantastical. Very proud! Great length, and I can't wait to see more! Just make sure the other characters are as well developed as some. Riley... Sigh, gorgeous...
Love, Dani
11/3/2008 c2 DanBan.E
Awesome! Honest to my Ipod (which I ADORE) you are a stunningly unbelievable author. I can imaging myself in all of these situations, well, not all of them 'cause I wouldn't do a lot of them, but still... Since this is a romance, I'm trying to think of who you will put with who... It's very fun to imagine. I can't wait to get to know these characters better! I have nothing bad to say.
Love, Dani (Read my stories! :?)
Awesome! Honest to my Ipod (which I ADORE) you are a stunningly unbelievable author. I can imaging myself in all of these situations, well, not all of them 'cause I wouldn't do a lot of them, but still... Since this is a romance, I'm trying to think of who you will put with who... It's very fun to imagine. I can't wait to get to know these characters better! I have nothing bad to say.
Love, Dani (Read my stories! :?)
10/7/2008 c1 DanBan.E
HEY! So I like it pretty much. Some comments... You said the it would go up to the thirties in June-July? 30 Degrees? Fahrenheit or Celsius, cause I am CON-FUSED! I like the word neon-esque, it made me laugh. I also liked how on her ipod she had the playlist "long vehicle trips", I've never thought of that before, and it made me laugh. Just saying, though you may not care, I had a counselor named Evan last year, and that also made me laugh. Okay, here are the two big things that bothered me.
1. You said Roxy's brothers name was River, then Riley, then River, then Riley. It so confused me!
2. The whole cigarette thing? It kind of disgusted me. I understand that people are going to do that, but not everyone will. Maybe next time, talk about the few that didn't jump for the chance at a cigarette, or at a alcohol shot, for those of us who are clean. And the whole fraternity thing? It's obvious it's like prescription drugs, right? That also kind of disgusted me. Not my cup of tea.
I loved your writing, and the characters so far! I can't wait to see the next chapter!
Love, Dani
HEY! So I like it pretty much. Some comments... You said the it would go up to the thirties in June-July? 30 Degrees? Fahrenheit or Celsius, cause I am CON-FUSED! I like the word neon-esque, it made me laugh. I also liked how on her ipod she had the playlist "long vehicle trips", I've never thought of that before, and it made me laugh. Just saying, though you may not care, I had a counselor named Evan last year, and that also made me laugh. Okay, here are the two big things that bothered me.
1. You said Roxy's brothers name was River, then Riley, then River, then Riley. It so confused me!
2. The whole cigarette thing? It kind of disgusted me. I understand that people are going to do that, but not everyone will. Maybe next time, talk about the few that didn't jump for the chance at a cigarette, or at a alcohol shot, for those of us who are clean. And the whole fraternity thing? It's obvious it's like prescription drugs, right? That also kind of disgusted me. Not my cup of tea.
I loved your writing, and the characters so far! I can't wait to see the next chapter!
Love, Dani