
7/4/2018 c1 Guest
So cute! Absolutely adore your stories!
So cute! Absolutely adore your stories!
2/7/2010 c1
1nanakathleen
Cute.
Couple of things though:
My main and only thing is that you didn't really show reason for Lena to hate Fredrick, so it lacked some strength, that it could have had.
Other than that, I liked it :)
And lolololol, you English people and your proper name calling. "Fredrick."
And we Americans don't sue THAT often. Though I guess we do abuse it.

Cute.
Couple of things though:
My main and only thing is that you didn't really show reason for Lena to hate Fredrick, so it lacked some strength, that it could have had.
Other than that, I liked it :)
And lolololol, you English people and your proper name calling. "Fredrick."
And we Americans don't sue THAT often. Though I guess we do abuse it.
11/13/2009 c1 Myr
Aw! :3
Aw! :3
10/23/2009 c1
13Aaerie
aw thats so cute if only all guys were like that instead of dim witted arrogant gorillas

aw thats so cute if only all guys were like that instead of dim witted arrogant gorillas
2/15/2009 c1 Mithee
kyaa! so cute^_^ really fluffy. and i loved it^_^ poor guy though she didn't catch him, it must've hurt. but at least she loves him^_^
kyaa! so cute^_^ really fluffy. and i loved it^_^ poor guy though she didn't catch him, it must've hurt. but at least she loves him^_^
2/4/2009 c1 encia
this a damn sweet story. well done!
this a damn sweet story. well done!
1/19/2009 c1 kayami
aw! dat was short and sweet...fantastic oneshot
keep writing
aw! dat was short and sweet...fantastic oneshot
keep writing
12/26/2008 c1
1Katie Saychiadu
First of all, I love your name. L-O-V-E it. Really.
And this story was simply adorable. A perfect one shot that pulled on my emotions exactly the way you wanted it too.
Good luck with your nomination! I can't vote for you because I'm competing with you, but I'll probably read your other stuff now!
Katie

First of all, I love your name. L-O-V-E it. Really.
And this story was simply adorable. A perfect one shot that pulled on my emotions exactly the way you wanted it too.
Good luck with your nomination! I can't vote for you because I'm competing with you, but I'll probably read your other stuff now!
Katie