for Catch Me When I Fall10/9/2008 c1 Pop the Bubble
Cute (:
Although, just a note, "staring" and "stared" only have one r :)
xx
Cute (:
Although, just a note, "staring" and "stared" only have one r :)
xx
10/8/2008 c1 Tiger-Sparks
Aww! I swear, you have the best stories ever! This is so cute!
And I didn't know some schools had lockers here! No fair! Why can't mine have them? xP
Oh and I absolutly love what Fred said! The “You heard me. Fall. In love. With me. Fall, and I’ll catch you. I love you.” ...Aww! Hehe, I'm totally being all squeely and girly right now. Darn you for making me like this! xP
Katie
Aww! I swear, you have the best stories ever! This is so cute!
And I didn't know some schools had lockers here! No fair! Why can't mine have them? xP
Oh and I absolutly love what Fred said! The “You heard me. Fall. In love. With me. Fall, and I’ll catch you. I love you.” ...Aww! Hehe, I'm totally being all squeely and girly right now. Darn you for making me like this! xP
Katie
10/8/2008 c1 
1JoiZ. D
Not bad, I enjoyed it alot. It's one of the sweetest stories I've read. :) Good job!
1JoiZ. DNot bad, I enjoyed it alot. It's one of the sweetest stories I've read. :) Good job!
10/8/2008 c1 2artistic dreamer
this is so cute! once again, you/e written an amazing cliche! loved this! :D keep writing more!
rachel :D
2artistic dreamerthis is so cute! once again, you/e written an amazing cliche! loved this! :D keep writing more!
rachel :D
10/8/2008 c1 19toffeecakesxox
Aw, so cute! I was going to write something about this, but yours is so much better! Anyways, I have a different idear now anyway. :D
Strawberry xx
19toffeecakesxoxAw, so cute! I was going to write something about this, but yours is so much better! Anyways, I have a different idear now anyway. :D
Strawberry xx
10/8/2008 c1 Vici Daily
awesome story, it was so cute! I love that he kept on catching her and all...and wonderfully written! Keep up the good work..~angela
awesome story, it was so cute! I love that he kept on catching her and all...and wonderfully written! Keep up the good work..~angela