for Cultural Autobiography4/14/2009 c1 Caterpillar-Drag-Queen
Very nicely wirtten. In only a few paragraphs I feel like I know this family better then anyone. I nearly cried. Well done
Very nicely wirtten. In only a few paragraphs I feel like I know this family better then anyone. I nearly cried. Well done
11/21/2008 c1 
2Hallucinogenic Poison
This short story I suppose you could call it? I really like your writing structure and your word diction, however, this is an overused topic and overused story: dead beat dad tries for a while, child thinks they can do certain things that will make the bad parent love them... I've heard about this a lot...
I DO like it from your perspective though.
2Hallucinogenic PoisonThis short story I suppose you could call it? I really like your writing structure and your word diction, however, this is an overused topic and overused story: dead beat dad tries for a while, child thinks they can do certain things that will make the bad parent love them... I've heard about this a lot...
I DO like it from your perspective though.