for If We Landed on the Corn Fields10/18/2008 c5 
9Dot Cubed
ADORABLE. And I love their little backstory too!
Okay, the part with the kids under the influence was probably the funniest part of this chapter. I love them. And this story. It's short but there's something about it that just amuses me to no end. Very nice and I can't wait for more!
9Dot CubedADORABLE. And I love their little backstory too!
Okay, the part with the kids under the influence was probably the funniest part of this chapter. I love them. And this story. It's short but there's something about it that just amuses me to no end. Very nice and I can't wait for more!
10/18/2008 c4 Dot Cubed
Ah! Jimmy and Dannie are SO CUTE. I honestly laughed out loud at the part where he told her his name was Jesus Christ. I actually kind of really love him. And they're adorable together.
It sucks that Dannie doesn't feel like she's a part of the community, though. I'd hate being that isolated.
Ah! Jimmy and Dannie are SO CUTE. I honestly laughed out loud at the part where he told her his name was Jesus Christ. I actually kind of really love him. And they're adorable together.
It sucks that Dannie doesn't feel like she's a part of the community, though. I'd hate being that isolated.
10/18/2008 c3 Dot Cubed
Aw, I love Jonah! He's absolutely adorable. I think the way you write kids is really good; like I could totally see him creepily waiting for Dannie to wake up and Ann giving her the socks. Hee.
haha, I'm kinda upset we didn't get to see Dannie's first day on the job. Something tells me that would've been amusing.
Aw, I love Jonah! He's absolutely adorable. I think the way you write kids is really good; like I could totally see him creepily waiting for Dannie to wake up and Ann giving her the socks. Hee.
haha, I'm kinda upset we didn't get to see Dannie's first day on the job. Something tells me that would've been amusing.
10/18/2008 c2 Dot Cubed
Okay, one thing about this chapter: every sentence is underlined. You might want to change that because it makes it kind of hard to read. haha
"My last boyfriend told me I sucked all his happiness out of him, and ripped a hole in his soul" -haha, that line cracks me up. Oh Dannie.
"I was rude to the customers, or something like that." -is it weird that I really want to see that?
Aw, I love Dorothy! And her brood. And I like how Dannie is finally going to get a job. Well, ish.
Okay, one thing about this chapter: every sentence is underlined. You might want to change that because it makes it kind of hard to read. haha
"My last boyfriend told me I sucked all his happiness out of him, and ripped a hole in his soul" -haha, that line cracks me up. Oh Dannie.
"I was rude to the customers, or something like that." -is it weird that I really want to see that?
Aw, I love Dorothy! And her brood. And I like how Dannie is finally going to get a job. Well, ish.
10/18/2008 c1 Dot Cubed
I absolutely love this beginning. Dannie amuses me SO much. The first section was absolutely perfect, too. Your characters just seem so real and the dialect so natural and yeah, this is just so good. I don't understand why you don't have more reviews! I guess I'll just make up for all of them.
I absolutely love this beginning. Dannie amuses me SO much. The first section was absolutely perfect, too. Your characters just seem so real and the dialect so natural and yeah, this is just so good. I don't understand why you don't have more reviews! I guess I'll just make up for all of them.