for Invisble11/4/2008 c1 
1strawstick911
WOAHH! that was soo dep !
LOL, well i really enjoyed, and i think it was one of your best pieces :)
and i really like your desciption of everything, i could imagine the whole thing
good luck with all your other pieces ! :D
1strawstick911WOAHH! that was soo dep !
LOL, well i really enjoyed, and i think it was one of your best pieces :)
and i really like your desciption of everything, i could imagine the whole thing
good luck with all your other pieces ! :D
10/11/2008 c1 UnsungLullaby
How sad. =(
I liked the poetry aspect of it though, it was fun to read, quick, my heart actually started to race a little bit. Haha.
As sad as it was, I was really able to idenify with the desires she had, how she wanted happiness and love - but would never have it because she messed up. That kind of remorse and reflecting is very human, and very nice to see.
Happy Writing and good luck on all your future works.
How sad. =(
I liked the poetry aspect of it though, it was fun to read, quick, my heart actually started to race a little bit. Haha.
As sad as it was, I was really able to idenify with the desires she had, how she wanted happiness and love - but would never have it because she messed up. That kind of remorse and reflecting is very human, and very nice to see.
Happy Writing and good luck on all your future works.