for Fix You10/15/2008 c1 
50Kristina Suko
How sweet. I like the sincerity and the imagery. It's touching. "Panicing" should be "panicking";)
~M
50Kristina SukoHow sweet. I like the sincerity and the imagery. It's touching. "Panicing" should be "panicking";)
~M
10/15/2008 c1 8Written
hey! not bad, seriously. like the repetition of (if only for a moment). very sad piece.
p.s. I saw your profile and i agree that anne rice vampires are cooler :)
8Writtenhey! not bad, seriously. like the repetition of (if only for a moment). very sad piece.
p.s. I saw your profile and i agree that anne rice vampires are cooler :)
10/14/2008 c1 Eloquent-Marionette
Aww, this is so sad but I love it! To me this is a story about someone who's trying to help their friend who's stuck in a bad relationship. And, no matter how hard they try, their friend just won't move on. But, that person is such a good friend that they won't stop trying. That's a good hearted person, for you. Never giving up on the people they care about. I think the last stanza sums it up perfectly- "I'll put you back together again/ But only you can heal yourself./ You need to let me in,/ And let go of him." I really like it! Is this based on a true life event? Because it seems like this situation is very common these days. At any rate, I loved it and I can't wait for more! ^_^ Keep writing forever and always!
~Davida
Aww, this is so sad but I love it! To me this is a story about someone who's trying to help their friend who's stuck in a bad relationship. And, no matter how hard they try, their friend just won't move on. But, that person is such a good friend that they won't stop trying. That's a good hearted person, for you. Never giving up on the people they care about. I think the last stanza sums it up perfectly- "I'll put you back together again/ But only you can heal yourself./ You need to let me in,/ And let go of him." I really like it! Is this based on a true life event? Because it seems like this situation is very common these days. At any rate, I loved it and I can't wait for more! ^_^ Keep writing forever and always!
~Davida