for Street Love9/19/2009 c3 
17Unique1952
Hmm, interesting.
I like the background you gave us about Miya's lack of trust in people and I think that you ended this chapter very cleverly.
Nice work.
I look forward to seeing where you take this story next.
17Unique1952Hmm, interesting.
I like the background you gave us about Miya's lack of trust in people and I think that you ended this chapter very cleverly.
Nice work.
I look forward to seeing where you take this story next.
2/1/2009 c2 Unique1952
Ah, very interesting. I like the dialect and I know what Khaliah means - I've been dealing with college stuff lately and I've had to practice with turning my accent off and on, or atleast trying to.
I look forward to seeing where you take this story. The only thing that I might watch is that I see a couple of areas where your letters should be capitalized, mostly around the quotes.
Again, nice work with this, I enjoyed reading and I look forward from reading more from you.
Ah, very interesting. I like the dialect and I know what Khaliah means - I've been dealing with college stuff lately and I've had to practice with turning my accent off and on, or atleast trying to.
I look forward to seeing where you take this story. The only thing that I might watch is that I see a couple of areas where your letters should be capitalized, mostly around the quotes.
Again, nice work with this, I enjoyed reading and I look forward from reading more from you.