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10/13/2008 c1 2Violet Thelaw
Great poem!

You know, I myself avoid the same-syllable-number, rhyming pattern because it usually sounds like it's created by a fifth-grader instead of someone older- this applies only to me.

But your rhymes are perfectly placed! And it's inner 'sounds' are pleasant when I read it. Oh yeah, wide vocabulary range! It creates more metaphoric meanings to the poem even if the 'thought' is there already. haha I hope you get me XD

Beautiful. Applause! :D

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