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8Written
wow. this is a really fascinating start! I like it because you've done a pretty good job with all the grammar type of stuff, and so it makes for a good read. and then there's the actual content, and that's fab too. the part where his family is laughing at him and stuff. shucks. that was well done.
8Writtenwow. this is a really fascinating start! I like it because you've done a pretty good job with all the grammar type of stuff, and so it makes for a good read. and then there's the actual content, and that's fab too. the part where his family is laughing at him and stuff. shucks. that was well done.