for Summer Night's Skyline10/18/2008 c1 
612simpleplan13
I really love this piece, the descriptions are so amazing and it's almost as if I'm there with the scene.
"The lorikeets dawn and dusk clamour"...I didn't like this only because I have no idea what a lorikeet is. It's an odd choice of bird? I might explain it in an a/n.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game forum and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile)
612simpleplan13I really love this piece, the descriptions are so amazing and it's almost as if I'm there with the scene.
"The lorikeets dawn and dusk clamour"...I didn't like this only because I have no idea what a lorikeet is. It's an odd choice of bird? I might explain it in an a/n.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game forum and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile)