for Death by proxy10/18/2008 c1 
612simpleplan13
I like the first line, the description listless was a great one. I also like the idea behind the piece. I did not like the last line, it's phrased awkwardly in order to fit the syllable count.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game forum and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile)
612simpleplan13I like the first line, the description listless was a great one. I also like the idea behind the piece. I did not like the last line, it's phrased awkwardly in order to fit the syllable count.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game forum and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile)