for SecretHidden Eden10/18/2008 c1 
612simpleplan13
I really like your descriptions here, they are beautiful. You really paint a picture of the scene. I also like the personification, it works well with the piece and your word choices are really great and original as well. I also like the title with the rhyming. Nice job.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game forum and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile)
612simpleplan13I really like your descriptions here, they are beautiful. You really paint a picture of the scene. I also like the personification, it works well with the piece and your word choices are really great and original as well. I also like the title with the rhyming. Nice job.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game forum and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile)