for Some Stay the Same11/10/2008 c19 Hazelnut Romance
nice chapter, more drama and a bit different for sure! can nat move in with chris? UPDATE!
nice chapter, more drama and a bit different for sure! can nat move in with chris? UPDATE!
11/10/2008 c19 
16Bananalogic
I liked it a lot,especially the way that the characters are changing. I think it is important that Natalia has to deal with her home life because the stability was misleading her. I was confused when it came to the driving. It seems like there was a lot of needless travel. ex: why didn't Trent and Chris just go to Trent's house? Natalia returning to her house (where she has said she doesn't want to be) just to meet with Chris who then takes her to his house? It doesn't flow well. Although the scene juxtaposes her past (her house) and her future(with Chris) I think that if this is what you want to portray it could be done with more intent.-hannah
16BananalogicI liked it a lot,especially the way that the characters are changing. I think it is important that Natalia has to deal with her home life because the stability was misleading her. I was confused when it came to the driving. It seems like there was a lot of needless travel. ex: why didn't Trent and Chris just go to Trent's house? Natalia returning to her house (where she has said she doesn't want to be) just to meet with Chris who then takes her to his house? It doesn't flow well. Although the scene juxtaposes her past (her house) and her future(with Chris) I think that if this is what you want to portray it could be done with more intent.-hannah
11/10/2008 c19 2DanBan.E
Wait, Natalia may know what Chris is talking about, but I feel like an idiot for not... What's going on? Great chapter, but some spelling mistakes. Try not to use fluff words as much, like I, he, was, been, had, she... It helps deepen the story and add to your writing. Other than that, amazing!
Love, Dani (Read my stories! :?)
2DanBan.EWait, Natalia may know what Chris is talking about, but I feel like an idiot for not... What's going on? Great chapter, but some spelling mistakes. Try not to use fluff words as much, like I, he, was, been, had, she... It helps deepen the story and add to your writing. Other than that, amazing!
Love, Dani (Read my stories! :?)
11/10/2008 c19 27femaleodd
this is a great chapter...but i did realize a bit of a hiccup in the story in the last chapter and in the evan's story one. in the evan story, he didn't know about her and alex but in the last chapter he did. i just thought that was weird. maybe he forgot?
lol anyways update. i loves you too!
27femaleoddthis is a great chapter...but i did realize a bit of a hiccup in the story in the last chapter and in the evan's story one. in the evan story, he didn't know about her and alex but in the last chapter he did. i just thought that was weird. maybe he forgot?
lol anyways update. i loves you too!
11/10/2008 c19 4Priscilla Shay
Ok, I didn't get to do it for last chapter bc you updated so quickly..but... Lol, "Me? Never!" lol...fave line
Hmm...now this chapter...
I was SO right...Chris is awesome :)
lol.
Keep updating
~P.S.
4Priscilla ShayOk, I didn't get to do it for last chapter bc you updated so quickly..but... Lol, "Me? Never!" lol...fave line
Hmm...now this chapter...
I was SO right...Chris is awesome :)
lol.
Keep updating
~P.S.
11/10/2008 c18 Scar
Moree! Give me more!
Moree! Give me more!
11/9/2008 c18 tickle582
aw yahh
i loved that whole convo between jenny and nat..lol
and oh yeah ohh yeah ohh yeah evan was so in love with jenny before or well back in the day...I KNEW IT!1
i can't wait till trent and kaitlin find out about nat and chris and i can't wait til you update evan and jenny's story
waiting on my toes...lol
~abby~
aw yahh
i loved that whole convo between jenny and nat..lol
and oh yeah ohh yeah ohh yeah evan was so in love with jenny before or well back in the day...I KNEW IT!1
i can't wait till trent and kaitlin find out about nat and chris and i can't wait til you update evan and jenny's story
waiting on my toes...lol
~abby~
11/9/2008 c18 Hazelnut Romance
nice way of tying in evan's and jen's situation! nice chapter and UPDATE soon!
nice way of tying in evan's and jen's situation! nice chapter and UPDATE soon!
11/9/2008 c18 SierralaineWalsh
This has got to be my fave chapter so far! Loved it.. Finally, they're back together! Aww.. *Evan is jealous! =p* :)
This has got to be my fave chapter so far! Loved it.. Finally, they're back together! Aww.. *Evan is jealous! =p* :)
11/9/2008 c18 angelblissjoy
hiya
just loved this chapter
actually clapped n jumped for joy after reading this
good going
keep it up
n please please updated son!
take care
love
hiya
just loved this chapter
actually clapped n jumped for joy after reading this
good going
keep it up
n please please updated son!
take care
love
11/9/2008 c18 2DanBan.E
God, their mom is such a bitch! She probably did come just to see how to not mess up! And not helping them live at all? Did she want them to effing die? Gosh.
Nat and Chris! SO CUTE! I am forever grateful for you getting them together, even though I know there will be drama, but still, while it lasts! YAY! UPDATE!
Love, Dani (Read my stories! :?)
2DanBan.EGod, their mom is such a bitch! She probably did come just to see how to not mess up! And not helping them live at all? Did she want them to effing die? Gosh.
Nat and Chris! SO CUTE! I am forever grateful for you getting them together, even though I know there will be drama, but still, while it lasts! YAY! UPDATE!
Love, Dani (Read my stories! :?)
11/9/2008 c18 jcc
aww this is cute. i like it. one thing though, typos. but if you keep updating like every day i think i can overlook them =)
aww this is cute. i like it. one thing though, typos. but if you keep updating like every day i think i can overlook them =)
11/9/2008 c18 1AlphaBeatKayGee
i really love this story along with the 2 linked to it! && you don't take 20192189 yrs to update either. Everytime you do update i love to read them! But this chapter i loved because Natalia finnaallyy came around =] : well...update soon!
-Kay gee
1AlphaBeatKayGeei really love this story along with the 2 linked to it! && you don't take 20192189 yrs to update either. Everytime you do update i love to read them! But this chapter i loved because Natalia finnaallyy came around =] : well...update soon!
-Kay gee