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1/20/2010 c1 15Abhyank
lol..well u knw it was cool coz u managed to make us feel friendly wid ur behavior..and guess d word orgasm no longer will make us uncomfortable to review ur stories ne longer :P It was a good friendly feel reading ur first shot
7/23/2009 c1 9Sakina the Fallen Angel
You managed to get the conversational tone down to a dime! Perhaps this one-shot could've been slightly longer to develop the characters a bit more; other than that it was cute!

~ Sakina x
10/23/2008 c1 Betsy B. Toil
it's a nice one-shot. interesting how they're both staring at each other but they both don't know it
10/17/2008 c1 6Chalk
oh, i really liked it! :D

i love one shots, and especially ones that end like this ;p
10/17/2008 c1 7x.betweenthelines
I wish it was a bit longer, but I loved it.

Cute. :)
10/16/2008 c1 6aravelle
Aww how cute ;]

Green eyes!
10/16/2008 c1 31Cupid's Jinx
Haha! Aw, how cute!

I loved it ^_^

Lyra

-x-
10/16/2008 c1 LaLa
This was really cute. I loved it. I found it very enjoyable to read. I really wish you would continue this, I would love to see what happens between them.
10/15/2008 c1 Summer Magick
That was adorable! I loved it. It made me giggle and it turned my day into a peachy-keen one!
10/15/2008 c1 3viennax
I had to read the last few lines several times before I finally got it. Well you know me XD

Super cutee :D except for those awkward moments you added in there. I guess that adds to the "cuteness" in a way. yay.

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