for Navigate Me Through Your Body11/1/2008 c1 Dilan
By the way, fantastic song that is.
And continue! It's brilliant.
I can't think of anything that needs fixing at the moment.
By the way, fantastic song that is.
And continue! It's brilliant.
I can't think of anything that needs fixing at the moment.
10/31/2008 c1 iDesign
Oh, that's great! But seriously, Condoms? Gift? Very realistically written and good description, keep up the good work!
Oh, that's great! But seriously, Condoms? Gift? Very realistically written and good description, keep up the good work!
10/28/2008 c1 crack the sky
i like it a lot; it's really well-written. there's just one thing that's confusing me; i'm not sure about your timing. i don't understand when these things happen. does the prologue happen before or after chapter one? i'm guessing after?
i like it a lot; it's really well-written. there's just one thing that's confusing me; i'm not sure about your timing. i don't understand when these things happen. does the prologue happen before or after chapter one? i'm guessing after?
10/28/2008 c1 
22Daydreamer-angel
I love your story. The whole concept seems well planned out. i like your characters and I hope you update soon.
22Daydreamer-angelI love your story. The whole concept seems well planned out. i like your characters and I hope you update soon.
10/27/2008 c1 5Paige N. Penn
Wow. It's really sweet although if you want to add more to it I think a prologue about their friendship before would be a good idea. It's really cool. Totally going in my favorites!
5Paige N. PennWow. It's really sweet although if you want to add more to it I think a prologue about their friendship before would be a good idea. It's really cool. Totally going in my favorites!
10/16/2008 c1 im.a.werewolf.rawr
aw! So cute! And well-written! This is going in my favourites, fo sho!
aw! So cute! And well-written! This is going in my favourites, fo sho!