for A Bad Beginning9/25/2009 c1 Bddssgsydhdndk
I loved that this piece had a lesson behind it! It was that you have to trust in yourself and other in order to make it from day to day in your life. I also liked the way that you showed and wrote about someone over coming a trouble or problem in their life. I really liked it. You write really good. Keep up the good work. Now I am going to go check out some more of your stuff.
I loved that this piece had a lesson behind it! It was that you have to trust in yourself and other in order to make it from day to day in your life. I also liked the way that you showed and wrote about someone over coming a trouble or problem in their life. I really liked it. You write really good. Keep up the good work. Now I am going to go check out some more of your stuff.
9/14/2009 c1 
27Just Silly Me
Nice one-shot... the title reminded me of the Series of Unfortunate Events by Lemony Snicket though, which made me decide to read this... good lesson and everything. I likes. -JSM
27Just Silly MeNice one-shot... the title reminded me of the Series of Unfortunate Events by Lemony Snicket though, which made me decide to read this... good lesson and everything. I likes. -JSM
3/5/2009 c1 C. M. Levy
You have a very emotional way of writing that it all seems so real to the reader. They are brought full on into the story and experience the same things. It is a surreal feeling. This story seems to have two conflicting sides: the bitter and the hopeful and I think it came along very, very nicely.
Great little piece here.
Thank you for the review, as well. *HUGS AND LOVE*
You have a very emotional way of writing that it all seems so real to the reader. They are brought full on into the story and experience the same things. It is a surreal feeling. This story seems to have two conflicting sides: the bitter and the hopeful and I think it came along very, very nicely.
Great little piece here.
Thank you for the review, as well. *HUGS AND LOVE*
3/2/2009 c1 u knw
wow that was a gd short story a lot of detail a bit emotional but great keep up writting ull go far
wow that was a gd short story a lot of detail a bit emotional but great keep up writting ull go far
3/2/2009 c1 FreekyDisaster18
(it refused to let me sign in properly *pouts*)
I absolutely love this story! The way you write makes it impossible not to care for the characters. You really want to reach in and give the character a great big hug!
(it refused to let me sign in properly *pouts*)
I absolutely love this story! The way you write makes it impossible not to care for the characters. You really want to reach in and give the character a great big hug!